Soul Reaper
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Hi my name is Osmund Anubis Ramsey Jr. but I like to go by Oz. I have 3 people in my family my mother Odette, and my little sister Zara who is four years younger than me. 14 years ago I died with my best friend. We were debating comics like we usually do. He was the one saying Marvel was the number one supehero franchise, but for me it was always DC. We were happily debating our cases when BOOM truck comes out of nowhere. My friend died on impact because he pushed me out of the way. That guy always like to play hero when it counts. Even though he is total thief. He even stole my wallet in his final moments. I don't mind that is just his personality. He always gave it back in the end except for this time. I died at the hospital and hour later. Than something amazing happened I open my eyes and boobs are in my face. My first thought was am I in heaven. It tuns out that I was reborn in a familar city Gotham home of the batman. I live pretty normal life that is until my mother got a new job as a corner for the Nexus City Police department. Nexus City has the most unexplained crimes in the country even more than Central and they have meta humans . It also can be more dangerous than here and this place is where you can get stabbed just by going to the movies. Lucky fo me I am that person son. He left when I was five years old told my mom he had another family. Oh I guess I forgot to mention my dad is the God of Death. He went by Osmund Anubis Ramsey Sr. When he was with us. We do not know his real name and his subordinate only call him Lord Death. Now I use the powers that he passed down to defend Nexus city from things that go bump in the night with the help of my friends.
Oz: For all the bad guys, monster and demons who want to invade my city you should know one thing FEAR THE REAPER !
Paladin : Oz that was so lame
Red Queen: I think it was kind of cool
Paladin: Your just sayin that because you like him
Red Queen: You do too
Oz: Can't you two just get along
Red Queen and Paladin: NO!
Witch Hunter: This is why I don't like working with women to much drama right hack
Hack: Don't drag me into this and aren't you a girl.
Oz: Can I go back to Gotham
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Blackninja63
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 93
- Views
- 11,946
Chapters(8 total)
- Chapter 8 Mantis QueenApr 6, 2020
- Chapter 7 I think our Math Teacher is a MurdererApr 4, 2020
- Chapter 6 The Team is FormedJul 26, 2019
- Chapter 5 Innocent and Helena ValintineJan 17, 2019
- Chapter 4 S.AS Sets outJan 16, 2019
- Chapter 3 We have a LairApr 17, 2018
- Chapter 2 The Superhero Appreciation SocietyApr 15, 2018
- Chapter 1 The Great and Powerful OzApr 15, 2018
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Community Reviews(2)
- Night_Shade0611Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Finding this novel might’ve taken a lot of time but I highly recommend to read it first before deciding the rating.
- TheLostBastilleRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Okay so maybe I'm just high maintenance or some thing but I'm seeing some major LACK of development in this author's writing style. This has been consistent in all his stories except I think the grammar.
One:Spelling is atrocious. We have auto correct, use it. You can also use Grammarly to help you with spell checking and basic grammar. You've written 10 different stories and it seems like you've gotten worse, I think your writing was better in in "REBORN IN MARVEL".
Two:I know it's the start of this story but the characters are so one dimensional and cliche, it borders on being Chuuni and cringeworthy, I suggest taking time to flesh out the quirks of your characters and give them individuality instead of making them standard archetypes of every anime character ever.
Three:Also idk if ur actually 14 or 15 now with how long you've been on this site, but you do realise that the legal age is still 18 yrs old in most countries right, 16 at the earliest for most western countries and 13 for Japan, so writing about these 14 yr old girls being naked in shit makes you more than a little Pedo.
Four:The basis for your story isn't very original, however if you fix the above issues, you have a hidden Gem of a story.
Five:Show dont tell, be descriptive of the surroundings and the inner monologue of your characters. Give them and their world Life. You're writing a story, not writing an essay, so write like it.
Six: Dont let people drag you down in progressing as an author, use this review as a stepping stone to become better. This is ur 10th fiction so obviously you love writing, just make sure you put the effort to write better.
You can choose not to listen to me though, I'm just some asshole on the internet.