Soul Evolution System

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Reborn as Alexander Ilios Apeiro in another world "Gaia" by an unknown entity will have to embark on an adventure to develop in this new world and have a place to belong.He will have as support a system that will allow to travel between worlds to be stronger and to maintain his happiness and freedom.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I publish a chapter of 2,500 - 3000 words every two days.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------I do not claim ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content of an anime in this novel.The cover image is not mine it was taken from: https://static.zerochan.net/Sephiroth.full.115435.jpg

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Ivan Jimenez

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Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

bat159Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I would love to be able to give this story a higher rating. However the problem is that it can be very hard to read at times. The basic story is GOOD, I would even say excellent for a first time author. I am at chap 72 and the story telling does get better the longer the author works and the more experience that he gets. The biggest problem is the sentence structure and the word spelling that the author uses. With some editorial assistance to balance the authors weaknesses, this would be a fantastic story.
RastyRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The plot is very nice and while not groundbreaking or extra deep it manages to be decently fresh and gripping (I binge-read it whole actually). The H-scenes are also aptly written, so little to complain about there.
As for negative points, I have to deduce 1 star for grammar. The text is comfortably readable (I guess thanks to the editing), but the number of errors is still worsening the experience considerably.
Flame lashRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The grammar is horrible, i have to piece together what its saying, which is sometimes impossible to do, the characters are alright not great but decent. Honestly if you were looking for a story that has a similar idea to it, but with better, everything, infinite path on webnovels is better than this
ObreezyRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I read this on webnovel and I really have no words. The gut who was sent to this world is like sex hungry and rape. He hits on every female he can and doesn't care if that woman is married and makes it seem like whatever he says about people's family is the truth. I forgot what chapter I go to before I stopped on webnovel but it was somewhere in the high school of the dead series where they went to an amusement park and the whole time all he does is hit on Saya's mother like damn man keep it in your pants for 2 seconds she is married she doesn't want you or like you in that way. But the author just keeps going at it where it feels like he would kill Saya's father just to get with the mother. I yell you that's some crazy shit anyway I just couldn't read anymore and the strong rape vibes from the first female to him and vice versa like the fuck. The grammwr could be a little better as well. Like I said this is just my opinions on this story and what I got from it reading it on webnovel and it's the same one here so.
WebzayneRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
There is a decent story hidden within this hot mess. But, you basically have to piece it together yourself. The grammar within is simply unacceptable... The author would be better off writing in whatever his native language is.
CimmerianRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
This is a meh-okay-story that teases readers with very popular story elements. It initially appears to be a system-type reincarnation/isekai harem? tale with fantasy and apocalypse elements where a middle aged guy is reincarnated into a body of his own choosing; don't be fooled, this is a Slice-of-Life Underage Harem story. The story has some good comedy elements if you like awkward pre-teen sexual humor and gay jokes.
For some reason, the "hero" chooses to restart life as a 12 year old horndog boy; on top of that, the god who reincarnates him (for entertainment) allows him to jump between various worlds including fictional worlds (stories, manga, video games, etc. entering at any point in the timeline of his choosing).
The first major part of the story primarily takes place in a Japanese Manga: High School of the Dead setting with the protagonist rescuing all the popular female characters, and female monsters, creating his psudo-harem (often while letting male characters die and/or actively killing them off, or humiliating them for comic releif). The protagonist has no goals or enemies and mostly just murderhobos zombies and picks up stuff into his infinite spatial storage. Sure, there are "quests" but they have no penalties, are magically easy for him to complete, and the rewards just give money and power-up an already overpowered super-rich character; the protagonist could apparently ignore them with little or no impact.
The story describes fun "looting" and exploitation of overpowered abilities like unlimited spatial item storage and ambiguously defined "berzerker modes" which he underexploits but still result in overpowering-cheat-results. The problem is that readers soon realize that the LitRPG isn't "real"; the story is a slice-of-life and should be titled "Shopping Fantasy Harem Girlfriend Tropes in the Apocalypse." The protagonist isn't under any pressure to advance and is always very overpowered for his situation. He isn't seeking skills or really m
AadarmRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The grammar and spelling is just terrible and needs to be fixed. Along with that the main character spends a majority of their time talking to or being told things by the system and saying "Haaa..."
The Real MoonmanRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Starts with a fairly standard isekai cliches, talking to god, getting sent to another world with some special kills, then goes to a survival setting where mc has to figure out how hes going to get by and get used to fighting. if that was how it continued to go for a while, it would honestly be a lot more interesting. However, mc gets the opportunity to summon a helper from "another world", and instead of summoning someone someone who could fight or increase his odds of survival, he summons A FICTIONAL SCIENTIST GIRL FROM AN ANIME HE WATCHED. His reasoning for choossing said character is really loose and doesnt make much sense. She has ZERO survival skills and MC has to provide for and teach her everything. Aside from that, he starts with a sword and has to figure out how to use it in the fantasy setting world he is in, but before long he starts summoning guns out the wazoo and goes Rambo on monsters. The whole "anime girl" thing really killed it for me, and the only way I could keep going after that was by pretending she was just a random person instead of an already established fictional character. She literally exists just to be mc's waifu material, as literally any time he interacts with her the author has to point out that mc is smiling at her. Author must really have a crush on said anime girl...
CyclopsSlayerRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
At its heart, this seems like it could have been a decent story. The concept seems okay, it is just the execution and characters that sink it.
I have respect for people who write in a language not their own, but there are limits and this walked all over them. There needs to have been some effort made to review and correct the story and this shows none of it.
There are many sentences that made me pause and unscramble them to try and extract meaning from them.
I tried this when it came out, then went back later and tried again. It didn't miraculously get better sad to say.
Zevra'sShadowCatRoyal Road
★ 1.0
This needs to be heavily edited for many reasons. Mostly due to how hard it is to read it at all.
If you decide to describe how dialogue is said or to describe how that person is acting. It needs to be placed with said dialogue, not slapped together with 4 other sentences describing dialogue that's burst-fired at the reader (space it out).
Almost every single sentence has several words that have a correct meaning, but not the correct version. I see "not" when you mean "no" and things like "ambiant" when you mean "ambiance." There's more, but it's quite obvious and I shouldn't need to reference every one of them to get my point across.
To tie into the previous bits, the sentence structure definitely needs work. Best advice is to read it out loud, because if it sounds awkward to hear (it is to read). If that doesn't work, ask a friend to do the same thing and help you find a better way to say the same thing.
I would recommend reworking the characters and remove the times where the story is implausible.
Like intelligent zombies being more intelligent than they should be and the world accelerating is advancement, when something that already existed in the world blew up (it should've already been a factor). Also stop with the forceful gay jokes that force another character to join the mc, you might as well kill off the other love interest instead (because in the girl's head, that's what it amounts to).
P.s. wasn't sure if this is technically spoiler, but I wanted to be sure.
I do recommend combining chapters, because they are incredibly short.
The story after all that.... is alright and enjoyable enough, but everything else drags down the story. I may be rating it too low, but I honestly can't justify above a 1 without a proper edit to make this bearable to read.