Sorcery of the Fair Folk : First Book of the Feycrowned Series

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The world of Vanaris is a place ripe with kingdoms and empires with different outlooks. Some fighting for dominance, some for peace and some even for the sake of war. However, the empire of Aveilorn stands above all. Ruled by mages and the common folk no more than slaves. A village of the descendants of several Feycrowned has long since turned into a global powerhouse, conquering all those that stand before them and  oppressing those that give in.

Their newest target is the kingdom of Bleuria, with a dormant mine of mithril that common folk are unable to extract. The path of battle is one the denizens of Aveilorn tread, annihilating all but the submissive.

However, would that be so simple with several Feycrowned appearing out of nowhere in particular? Would the sophisticated mages prevail or the untamed wild Feycrowned succeed in driving off the intruders? Or would those Feycrowned even be willing to help in protecting the kingdom?

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
TheNextBestseller

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ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICDRAMAMARTIAL ARTSMALE LEADGRIMDARKSTRATEGY

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4.2/ 5.0
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Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • pretty little psychoRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Honestly, the characters are fab and the world feels pretty neat. I like how they all interact with each other, it actually feels organic, having to use other ways of describing the world for different characters is actually pretty smart.
    just some constructive criticism before too many more chapters are made with this flaw: stop using the formula of "words" he said. use something different, have someone do something before out right saying it once in a while. Thought this might help, but what do I know?
  • loveribbonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I love the story and characters, your world is so alive and lived in with them, but the grammar makes this just so awkward to read. Glad that you're open to constructive criticism, it will make your book so much better!
    Other than the grammar issue, your book is absolutely fine, keep going with the direction you're going and I'm sure more and more people will be enthralled by your work!