Sometime in Autumn: A Fallen Noble’s Journey to Immortality

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In a sudden twist of fate, marked by vicious scheme, Marcus Cornelius, a fifteen-year old Bronze ranked Knight and the second son of Count Augusto of Thorns, suddenly became a Baron but was subsequently ambushed on his way to his new fief..

Upon death, he woke up in a body of a three-year old boy in a world distinct from the lands he once knew..

After having been played by fate, he opportunely took the identity of the boy and went on to live a new life.. in a world full of fortune and secrets.. a place where men can transcend mortality.. a vast land where Immortals reign supreme..

Follow our MC in his own journey to Immortality..

Hello fellow novel readers,

This is just an attempt to write my own novel. And from hereon, I will have to warn you that english is not my native language, so please bear with the grammatical or spelling mistakes.

Also, this novel is really intended to be a short one so there might be a lot of time skips.

Thanks and enjoy,

Qairi

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2020
Author
Qairi

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.2/ 5.0
Followers
288
Views
220,240

Chapters(94 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • Astral464Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love this novel keep it up is quite well written and i love the power system of the MC, his growth of the world around him as it is quite interesting to.
  • Mister BillRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    A lot of fun so far and very much a cultivation story. Better than 90% of the translations I read (and I'm picky about those). Good pace, good writing, and worth reading.
    A couple unique bits to it, too.
  • Zexis14Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The beginning of the story is quite slow, but man when it picks up, it is without a doubt a masterpiece in the making, minimal spelling errors and meaningful dialogue. Story is deeper than fighting young masters and endless cultivation, it presents the background politics that exist in a cultivation world that's usually overlooked because of endless young masters and tournaments. Another great point is that apart from the usual fortuitous encounters, the story seems to develop in a logical manner with near zero plot holes. Great potential, cant wait to see more.
  • Sun Da 21Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    So i stumbled upon this hidden gem not expecting much but oh boy i got a surprise there is not much of a review seeing as it only got 15 chapters but i like the power system of the MC, his growth and the world around him, i also want to see how his power system will compare against the inmortals
    If there was a flaw (although not a lot as the story is just starting) is the characters not being too fleshed out i could say
    So yeah i definitely will keep up with the story daily
  • uictoriam4Royal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The main character is 3-4 years old but acts like an adult,which is btw impossible through human biology but still could be acceptable as he is a 15 y/o transmigrates to the new younger body.What is not acceptable is that all the children are the same.The adults in this world are shown as noobs who couldn't even use logic to learn basic weapon moves despite hunting animals for food.All that foolish xianxia bulls**t is also present such as weird language,telling us readers how to think,and so on.The english is also atrocious,more like a cheap translation rather than one written by an author.Not recommended at 9chapters
  • GaskRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    If you've ever read a simple xianxia that basicly follows a how to template then you'll know what this fiction is like.  It's not bad or good, it's just bland and dull.
    The protagonist, Qai, reincarnates into a nameless village filled with unimportant people.  They exist simply to fill out the stage for one of Qai's extended training arcs and have no meaningful role in the story.  While there he grinds his body tempering technique, which he reincarnated with and impresses everyone, this goes on for around 24 chapters. During this period he's never really challenged and everything he does is amazing.  Even his body tempering advances rather easily and only requires eating meat and training/combat which provide him with disproportionate benefits.
    Eventually a cultivator appears who sets Qai upon the path of joining a sect where all the typical antagonistic sect tropes take place.  But before that Qai picks up a Core Formation insect hive in the woods and effortlessly binds with it.  Conveniently they require no care or maintenance and can be summoned instantly to deal with any threat he faces.  They'll even complete complex tasks on demand and if that sounds boring that's because it is.
    To add insult to injury Core Formation has been represented as being the pinnacle of power as of chapter 53.  So we have this little noob cultivator who's guarded by all these over powered bugs.  As a result any sense of tension or danger became impossible and any challenge he faced at this stage came across as mere filler.
    If you don't have much experience with the genre then you might enjoy this story.  But if you do then nothing here will stand out as original and you'll likely become bored with how easy and unimaginative the plot has been so far.  Hopefully the author can pull it around in the future by devoting more attention to his characters and by diverging from the standard template that he's using.