Someone to Believe In
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Siren is an artist of all trades who fills her time with creation and performance. Zander is an adventurer who is always on the hunt for new challenges and undiscovered wonders. Both are solo acts, beings who make their own way through life and never settle for long in one place or with one person. Both are also immortal in a universe where living forever is a privilege held by very few.
After a chance meeting and a planetwide catastrophe, Siren and Zander agree to work together in an effort to set things right. But when a simple mission goes wrong, these two independent souls might learn that sometimes, even an immortal needs someone else to lean on.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- silentlysnowing
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 1,526
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Zero-TwelveRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5It is a well written story with interesting characters. The story itself was not for me, but it could be a great start to a series with these characters.
I thought it was going to be the start of a series, and was slightly disappointed when it wrapped up. It kept me hooked up till the end, but it was reading out out of curiosity rather than being a page turner.
Style - Nice and clean with good descriptions, personally I like more action and I had a few challenges with the logic. My preference is for a faster paced style, and being a bit more engaged with the story. I was fine with the intro it was the core that was lacking for me.
Grammar - No issues, nothing that put me off the story
Story - this was where I had an issue, core plot did not feel "real" to me and things dragged on for me when they were isolated, but then it would have really dragged on for them. However, I kept reading to find out how it worked out, and they way it was resolved did not really work for me. I think that there was room for improvement here.
Characters - great complex characters plenty of room for development. Did like the sense that time was endless for these characters and they had time to work through and resolve things. Along with how to keep a relationship going for unlimited time.