Solving Problems Using Fire
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
All Eloise wanted was to turn her maths exam papers in. Now she's trapped in a different world and is surrounded by monsters.
The only path forward is Magic.
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Chapters on Monday/Wednesday/Friday.
Cover art commissioned fromCorinna Braghieri.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- NonCrowds
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 49
- Views
- 4,295
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- zryfurnRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This is a fun/funny LitRPG. The MC is humorous with her deadpan/dry humor, which is the kind I enjoy.
The overall pacing of the story is a bit uneven. I think it jumps into things pretty fast, which is good if the audience is someone used to isekai. She literally takes a step and ends up in the fantasy world, no explanation. Again, this is fine for an isekai audience, kind of like the truck scenario. I do find the next few chapters past the 2nd to be a bit slow because it's MC fighting the same monster over and over. Then it picks up again in the latest chapter when an outsider arrives. I think the mystery of the tower was more interesting to me than the monster fighting, but that's just my preference.
Regarding the writing itself/prose, I think it was a bit stale at times. Eloise did this. Eloise did that. Then Eloise did this. etc. Nothing major though. Some of the phrasing was also a bit awkward? Hard to pin down exactly why, maybe missing some prepositions? But again, nothing major. Definitely readable.
Overall, good story. I enjoyed it, and would recommend for anyone who likes stats, spells and RPGs.
4.5/5