Soloist Gamer
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Description
This is a story of a planet similar to our planet earth. Its just that this planet is supported by the will of gaia itself. This world are filled of magical mana that allows almost all of the living organisms to have special ability inside their genes. The world itself have one rule. The rule is Power above anything else. How will jaejin a novice adventurer move his way up.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- DionfhelCuyno(Verde)
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 30
- Views
- 31,204
Chapters(130 total)
- s2 ch11Apr 22, 2023
- s2 ch10Apr 21, 2023
- s2 Ch9Apr 21, 2023
- S2 Ch8Apr 21, 2023
- S2 Chapter7Apr 21, 2023
- s2 chapter 6Apr 20, 2023
- s2 chapter5Apr 20, 2023
- s2 Chapter 4Apr 20, 2023
- S2 Chapter 3Apr 20, 2023
- S2 Chapter 2Apr 20, 2023
- S2 chapter 1Apr 20, 2023
- Chapter 19 End of first SeasonApr 18, 2023
- Chapter 18 The Ran Character, kneels to BaphometApr 18, 2023
- Chapter 17 Lady in Red, Fateful encounterApr 18, 2023
- Chapter 16 The use of Fine burr and Luxury protection potionApr 17, 2023
- Chapter 15 The brawler skillApr 17, 2023
- Chapter 14 The Brawler is an AccolyteApr 17, 2023
- Chapter 13 Why do Dungeon boss smell so bad?Apr 17, 2023
- Chapter 12 Rank C DungeonApr 16, 2023
- Chapter 11 Breakfast DateApr 15, 2023
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Community Reviews(3)
- DrunkenDutchRoyal Road★★ 1.5You started the novel with a big but uninteresting infodump. It did not add anything to the story since it's so forgettable. Most readers would just skim it or skip it. Do not be hasty and let the MC explore the world. Show us how he interacts with the world and what he learns. This is how worldbuilding works and the main character will develop. Also worldbuilding by narrating pieces of text is generally bad. Just look at M. Night Shyamalan's avatar the last airbender.
Another note is the way you write. So far it feels like a chess game. pawn to B4, queen to E5. While it is good that you describe everything that's happening, it's just a summary of events. How does the MC feel? How does he look at things? How does he experience the world? It would have been alot more interesting if you started from the MC's point of view.
The story itself? Bland and boring but much better then your other works - RedblueRoyal Road★★ 1.5there are a few errors
This is a story of a planet similar to our planet earth. It's just that this planet is supported by the will of Gaia itself. This world is filled with magical mana that allows almost all of the living organisms to have the special ability inside their genes. The world itself has one rule. The rule is Power above anything else. How will jaejin a novice adventurer move his way up?
stuff like
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nothing big really. - kusagiRoyal Road★★ 1.5Your story feels like a fanfiction of a webcomic called solo levelling. If it is please add the tag and u need to fkx the grammar and spacing of paragraphs because it is hard to read when the storys looks so scrappy atleaat on phone