SkyLand Saga

Self-Published

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Description

Torn from this world, Ash wakes up in the shattered lands of Elysion; a fantastical world of magic and monsters that seems a little too RPG to be real.His last memory? Playing DnD with his oldest friends.Now he’s got magic powers and a formless companion who seems to know less about what’s going on than him! How did he get here? Why is he climbing a giant tower? Why are there items dropping from monsters? Why is everything trying to kill him?Join Ash as he embarks on a journey to find his friends and a place in this new, unknown world.

Hi there! Thanks for checking out SkyLand Saga!This is my first foray into writing so please don't hesitate to point out flaws, I just ask you to be gentle please.I'm a student, so I'll be posting M/W/F every morning Australian time.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: NuskiKaze

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 24
Views: 5,427

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Chevy92Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Love the premise! I quite like the beginnings of character development you have put forward, some do appear a bit generic but given this is the prologue, no doubt more meat on the bones will follow. My favourite character so far is Ash! Very keen to see the further development of this world 😊😊
Unity DragosRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Story: I really do like the premise of it so far. Can't say much about it yet since it's still fairly new right now, The way the main character gains their powers is nice, as well as their reaction to it. It's a logical progression based on their current predicament and their internal thoughts.
Character: The main character hasn't been completely fleshed out yet, but I do like them, at least a little bit. They definitely aren't a bad person, shown by the way they care about their missing friends. But they feel kind of basic in that way. The flaws they have are somewhat obvious to predict, a typical guy who's kind to his friends but is trying to constantly move on from a past trauma. It's nice, but not original.
Grammar: I have seen plenty of mistakes in this department. There many misspelled words and words that are either missing from the sentence or wrongly added in, somewhat making the story hard to read. The writer definitely needs to look over their work more and edit them out.
Style: This is one of the biggest problems I've seen here, unfortunately. The writer sets the scene out in a confusing way, making it hard to imagine where the main character is and what they are doing. The actions as written are clear enough, most of the time, it's just the deployment of those actions that I'm having a hard time following.
Overall: The story is still something I'll continue reading, just to see the evolution of both it and the writer themselves. It's enjoyable, and I like it. It's just the glaring flaws in grammar and writing style that detract from it, but those are easily fixed with editing.