Six Seals

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

Raskaro

• 66- Riders Of The West (1)
  Mar 17, 2020
• 65- Traveling To The Region Border (3)
  Mar 8, 2020
• 64- Traveling To The Region Border (2)
  Feb 23, 2020
• 63- Traveling To The Region Border (1)
  Feb 9, 2020
• 62- The Chase Of Three (2)
  Jan 30, 2020
• 61- The Chase Of Three (1)
  Jan 19, 2020
• Notice 2-(No chapter, again.)
  Jan 6, 2020
• 60- Cruel Crescent
  Dec 29, 2019
• 59- Not Afraid Of The Future
  Dec 23, 2019
• 58- A Talk Under The Stars
  Dec 21, 2019
• 57- Conflicts May Rise Out Of Nowhere, But Your Heart Will Have To Be The Same (4)
  Dec 16, 2019
• 56- Conflicts May Rise Out Of Nowhere, But Your Heart Will Have To Be The Same (3)
  Dec 15, 2019
• 55- Conficts May Rise Out Of Nowhere, But Your Heart Will Have To Be The Same (2)
  Dec 11, 2019
• 54- Conflicts May Rise Out Of Nowhere, But Your Heart Will Have To Be The Same (1)
  Dec 5, 2019
• 53- The Raven's Offer (3)
  Nov 1, 2019
• 52- The Raven's Offer (2)
  Oct 26, 2019
• 51- The Raven's Offer (1)
  Oct 19, 2019
• 50- Immortal Of The Forest (4)
  Oct 14, 2019
• 49- Immortal Of The Forest (3)
  Oct 9, 2019
• 48- Immortal Of The Forest (2)
  Oct 4, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Tana NariRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  That is to say long hours of forcing myself to memorize information while surrounded people I don't much care for. It's not that the story is badly presented, it's just that it's a whole lot of tedium that even the characters of the story don't seem to find all that important.
  That said, it has all the other elements. A thought out system with a writer who doesn't resort to lazy tropes, can convey ideas well, and has some top-notch worldbuilding.
  If it had a plot and a more refined writing style, it has excellent potential. But as-is, you're in for a slog.
  Characters: The main character is likable enough, if you like the sort of bland self-insert character archetype. While not necessarily a bad person, he has no discernable goals or drive or personality to call his own. Given how long it takes for anything to occur within the story proper, this is a bad thing.
  The setting itself makes for a much more interesting character. It is clearly thought out in great detail, with its own customs, idioms, and belief systems which strike me as both creative and believable. Aside the supernatural aspects, I would have no trouble believing that these were real-world practices from some foreign culture.
  That takes a level of insight and planning which few writers ever accomplish, and deserves to be praised.
  Story: Join the story of someone from the literal backwoods going to a xainxian school and... that's it. There's nothing in the first twenty thousand words which resembles a conflict to be resolved, or a goal to be accomplished. The main character's Mysterious Origins (tm) exist, but don't mean or do anything. He doesn't make friends, there's not even a tournament arc.
  Don't get me wrong, I appreciate that the story avoids the tired monodimensional cliches of asshole professors and idiotic bullies, but if there's nothing plot relevant occuring, the story could just start later when the plot arrives. There's no need to start him off as the "new kid" when instead the story could