Sir John, The Conceptual Existence (Omnipotent Protagonist)

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Description

John is a Conceptual Constant.

After trillions of years holding reality together, John has finally clocked out. He just wants to live He’s done being the "source of all things"; he’d much rather be the "source of nothing."

But the universe didn't get the memo.

From high-tier cultivators seeking a "spark of divinity" to persistent telemarketers who somehow have his cosmic frequency, everyone wants a piece of him.

They bring their prayers, their demands, and their "destinies" to his doorstep. John wants to do whatever he wants to do and it is his story.

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Status
Hiatus
Author
Miraylea

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSTRONG LEADPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADSECRET IDENTITYPOST APOCALYPTICHIGH FANTASYARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCEATTRACTIVE LEAD

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
12

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Community Reviews(1)

  • hardking5353Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Style -
    The writing style is a little bit different than what I expected, but it does not create problems or have any kind of problem that is pointed out. A simple story is told here, I believe we would be able to see the style of the author as the story continues on and there are more words and advanced use of language.
    Grammar -
    The grammar is good enough, and I don't see any clear mistakes that stand out in the story. Basically, there is no problem, as the grammar itself does not affect the story and is good enough for having fun. I can easily say that it is better than most of the stories here.
    Story -
    Still, early to tell something.  But it has the basic elements of kingdom buildings and army buildings mixed with LITRPG as well as fantasy progression type novels.
    Character -
    The character in my eye needs to be more fleshed out and given humanity. It can be fixed in the later chapters, but for the time being, there are times that I feel like characters, especially the protagonist, are more robotic than usual. Other than characters being robotic there is not many problems. This can be fixed on by author too in later chapters.