Singing life Book one - Hatchling

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What happens to a world where the source of magic has been gone for so long that no one even remembers it outside of fairytales? When technology runs amok, further upsetting the balance of life, bringing all to the brink of extinction?Of course, something, somewhere, decides it is more than time to tip the scales again, bringing back old myths to repair the broken balance, willing or not!--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Please be gentle with me as this is my first foray in book writing.I will not abide by trolls, but constructive reviews and criticism are always welcome.I hope you'll enjoy reading as much as I enjoy writing!

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Louve_Moonsong

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 285
Views: 83,999

Chapters(27 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

SiarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Definition of a lovable story! The characters are lovable and well done. We have yet to meet the dark side of the story, but for now they appear well-written already, good intro. Tho the part about the MC and her speech disability has some holes; how does she explain the "internet not infernet" part, the details in her speech. Solution: ramp up her telekinetic powers "unconsciously plants the meaning of her phrase or w/e shes trying to communicate", thus letting them understand the nuances of her speech.
Love your story, awaiting updates!
Good luck with the writing!
Dr_DacRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Color me surprised RRL has a real gem, the characters especially the MC practically drags you
into the story. It may not be everyones taste but i did enjoy reading the 12 released chapters thus
far. The story has enough potential to make me press "Latest updates" in the hopes of seeing
another chapter.
A simple review because i am incapable of finding any major flaws, the worldbuilding is nice,
each major character has its own personality that is not a 0815 genre. I did not see any errors in
spelling and grammar so simply 5/5 a truly nice read.
Root GreevilRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
There is not enough out yet for me to do a full advanced review, but I will address what has been written so far. Overall, I am really enjoying the story. It is fairly fast paced and light-hearted, with a cast of characters who are not one dimensional and the makings of an interesting story line. The grammar seems to be at the very top of RRL, and I can't recall any major mistakes. The grammar is one of the major pluses of the story. The story moves along and there is not a lot of info dumping going on. The style is similar to a lot of the popular YA fiction out now and fits the general tone of the story. I would not be surprised to see this make it within the top 50 of the popular this week section. I highly recommend reading a few chapters to get a feel for the story. The only criticism I have is the author has a bit of trouble with scene transitions. There is not a lot of fluff and extraneous description, which is good, but there have been a few times where it has not been incredibly clear how the characters got from one location to another or the transition was ignored.
AShyLeecherRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The author takes modern society and slowly feeds magic and fantasy into it in a style reminiscent of Fablehaven. There have been very little problems with grammar in this, and all of them are almost unnoticeable. The story adds a unique twist on old legends before incorporating them into itself, distinguishing itself from other stories. The characters are built slowly, detail by detail, as if they were a brick wall, offering a sturdy foundation. The entire story thus far is told from the viewpoint of the main character, bringing a sense of realism to an otherwise disjointed, dreamlike experience. I have not noticed any significant plot holes or failings of any kind.
My overall opinion? It is a great story with a lot of potential for an epic adventure similar to Fablehaven.
SciFiAddictRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story reminds at times of the Elemental Series by Mercedes Lackey with the sparks of very enjoyable daily living detail (which I suck at, in my stories) that appear fairly regularly, and at other times, sort of like a prequel to the world created by Illona Andrews (husband and wife team of authors) for the Kate Daniels series.
It is a very enjoyable story and one that I can’t wait to see where it takes me, I just hope it doesn’t turn too dark as what happened to the Dresden series. As I normally do, I am only giving this story four and half stars for grammar because no one has perfect grammar.
SaphyronRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Quite a good story.
The start was quite Dark, and the story is not full of sunshine and unicorns, but it's still quite good and lighthearted at times.
The grammar is also not too shabby, found a few mistakes here and there, but compared to the rest of the authors on here on this site, it is miles ahead.
I do recommend this and hope it will continue to update.
frealzillaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I am really enjoying the story so far and look forward to more in the future.