Sin-Eater

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[I was reborn as a sin-eater and now I want to eat the demon-king ] [litRPG] [R16+]

In the depths of a decayed, ancient dungeon, Canta is given a second chance at life. With a new body and the powerful, ancient class of a Sin-EAter, highly revered by the holy-people of the surface-world, he sets out to leave his past behind and forge a new path for himself. But his journey is not without obstacles, as he discovers that he is not alone in the darkness.

Trapped with him is a mysterious and powerful being who shares Canta's desire for change but is presumably consumed by evil if his gut feeling is to be trusted. As they embark on a journey together, Canta must navigate the dangers and secrets of the dungeon as well as confront the darkness within himself and his new partner beside him. With each step, he is forced to question what it truly means to be a good man and whether redemption is truly possible for someone like him.

As the two unlikely companions battle their way through the world under the dreadful shadow of the Demon-King, they will encounter terrifying monsters, treacherous traps, and ancient magic. But the greatest challenge they face may be their own inner corruption and old mannerisms. Can Canta even rise above his past and become the hero he was meant to be, or will he succumb back to the darkness that fully surrounds the two of them? Find out in this thrilling fantasy adventure by renowned and trending fantasy author D.M. Rhodes!

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Information

Status
Ongoing
Year
2021
Author
D.M. Rhodes (Razzmatazz)

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADCOMEDYSTRONG LEADMALE LEADREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSIONDUNGEON CRAWLER

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Rating
4.2/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

  • BullerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    That was a lie. This isnt family friendly. How could anybody think this is anything like that? Calling this family friendly would require that every person in the family had to be accustomed to very good description of body horror while also being at an age over 18. What are the chances of that?
    Putting that pretty damn good introduction out of the way, I want to say that I am deeply serious about the greatness of this story¨s descriptions. Never before have I thought I would ever think about how worms felt between my teeth and in what ways they could wriggle around in there. 5/5 stars for that, dude.
    Definelty helps that I couldn't find any actual errors with the grammar either. Put me right into immersion-mode, ready to fear a perpetual state of being, never stopping, always feeling a hunger that will never be filled. 5/5.
    Story? Who needs a story? Well.... stories in general need a story. That's why there's a tag called story and all. And while this one hasn't really gotten that deep into its story, you have to admit that this starting bit is pretty dang good. 5/5
    Characthers? Hunger, fear of being left alone, hunger again, somebody apparently leading them to their own dead to the a childish crush, and just a bit more hunger to top it off. 5/5,
    I think I gave everything 5/5 so why not top that off with a overall of 5/5? Read this. Already have it as my fave.
  • avg readerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    well written plot, interesting character interactions, wonderfull twists and a nice smattering of jokes to add in some flair. Main character and his wife are both insane, but in a good way. 10/10 will read again. i have nothing else to say exept thanks to the author but i need 50 words so thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks thanks
  • Warix VivianaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story is, quiet. Yes, I feel like that's the best way to describe it. It's a journey of a man. It's got a lot about it but what I mean is I wouldn't be surprised to read 20 chapters about being in a maze or 30 about politics in a city or a full action fight for 10.
    The story is good. Definitely unique. Graphic both physically and emotionally. An undying hunger meets a harsh reality. Unique comes to mind.
    Also, no lie, I clicked the femboy ad to get here and don't worry my fellows, it's here.
  • TheBirdsTalkRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story is in an early phase so it's hard to say it's going to be great but it's pretty darn good so far. There is a psychological element that comes through good charatization that leaves me both sad and unnerved and the world building is top notch. I'm slightly worried how the main plot is going to shake out as the revenge theme set up in the first chapter is gone and there isn't a objective for the characters. The story has plenty of promise and I hope it fulfills it's potential for greatness.
  • Blind SerpentRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Overall:
    The story flows really well. The world is explained through the narrative, there aren't info dumps and it feels quite organic. It's definitely not for the squimish - really not for the squimish.
    However, if you do get past it - or like it, the MC and main character are really well done, their dialogue is intriguing and the descriptions really paint a picture.
    Style Score:
    The descriptions and dialogue are all really great. Vivid, realistic, and grimey. There are occasional hiccups with flow, especially with the longer sentences. I feel myself occasionally stop as I read - though it gradually went away as I kept going. Becoming almost non existent by the 10th chapter.
    Other than that, it is very well done. Clear and colourful.
    Story:
    I was drawn quite quickly into the plot. I've never read this sort of story - with the gore and such - but even the initial shock of it didn't dampen the progress.
    It largerly revoles around the MCs discovery of his new world, his abilities, attempts to survive and subsist. If that were all, then it would have been a little boring - but thankfully, there is another character which presents itself as a mystery and reaching this character drives the overall arch. At least thus far.
    Everything seems fairly consistent. There was one point of confusion during chapter 4 or 5, but it cleared up pretty quickly. So I didn't think it detracted from the flow of the story.
    Grammar:
    Nothing jumped at me. The story reads easily and were I to look for something I'm not sure that i'd find it. So, pretty darn good.
    Character Score:
    This one's really great. Maybe it's because I don't often read such stories, but the MC is very unusual, and so is the other character. Hints are dropped along the way and neither disappoints. I was actually curious enough to read the whole way to a somewhat arch resolution at chapter 10. Primarily driven by the characters and my curiosity towards them.
    Great work, I recommend it to anyone not squimish.
  • Bluelightning42Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is very clearly not a first novel by razzmatazz.
    The style and grammar are both developed and well put together. There are zero mistakes and nothing that seems out of place or awkwardly written. I'd say the manner of describing how characters are feeling and reacting Is one of the strong points of the novel - without coming off as drawn out and overdone, descriptions tread that fine line between not enough and too much perfectly.
    Story hasn't progressed that far in the chapters that are out yet but I'm hooked and want to continue reading. Hints of the background have been artfully strewn about without a single infodump.
    The characters are where it shines. They have well made personalities you can visibly feel. I think this is romance tagged and while any murder hobo story can flow with cardboard background characters a romance series needs more and I can definitely say this delivers.
    We are given two characters to focus on and without spoiling too much you can get a sense of one of their personalities despite never having seen them.
    Finally, there is the secret "overall/enjoyment" stat. Considering how much I enjoyed this I can definitely say I recommend it!
  • sneakysnekRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I´m not gonna lie there are things that confuse me. Like how the MC is supposed to want to eat the demon king and why their automaton love interest is so scary but overall the grammar is good, its interesting, and the author has a way of making bargains so 4 1/2 stars
  • smutking69Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Thnxs for the title been a while since something this new has caught my intrest and the femboy ascept is welcome and rare hope you continue to work this gem
    have a wonderful day
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  • malinizgeldiRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    If your imagination is wide enough, this series can be a poetic painting, song, musical or whatever you can imagine. it tricks the reader like a litrpg and throws a painting in your face. An excellent novel in every way. I wish this novel was in the first place like "mother of learning". our writer friend is still an active writer. I will follow the author from now on. I would like to say this too. The first episode of the series is officially a shortened version of the first 10 episodes of the "Arifureta" series novel. but it never looks like him. Next to the "Arifureta" garbage, this series is excellent. I would still like to point this out.
  • O_WeaverRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It's well written with excellent grammar and pacing. It has a lot of potential when it comes to world building, and the characters come across as very distinct. The initial start is also great, with a mysterious horror vibe, and a great sense of atmosphere that hooked me from the very beginning, but after reaching chapter 25 I've decided to drop this for now.
    While this story doesn't have a "Comedy" tag, it really should, because at a certain point it changes from a grim-dark/horror sorta feel to an exaggerated comedy with the main character (quite literally) getting tossed around and abused just for giggles. Think exaggerated anime shouting and slap-stick comedy. This can be entertaining for a chapter or two, but it tends to drag on a bit longer then necessary, and in moments that would be perfect for doing serious world building the characters are instead cursing and acting out jokes. It made me start missing the mysterious horror aspect from the beginning.
    There are very few litrpg's that get that sort of atmosphere right, and it was a bit disappointing to see it gone so quickly.
    It feels like it became a completely different type of story in a very short amount of time.
    Edit: Author added the comedy tag. Bumped my overall rating a hair since the tags reflect the newer content for future readers.