Silver Spoon Series

Self-Published

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Description

Alan was just trying to blow up the international space station when his life took a dramatic turn. Earth and everyone on it was gone, but he had a chance to win it back, sorta. His time in the army would serve him well as he found himself fighting to survive alone in a new world of magic and danger. Does he have what it takes or will humanity be left behind? Join him as he explores dungeons to earn himself new classes and fights beasts to gain power. At first he faces vicious goats, crafty squirrels, and "killer" hedgehogs. How will he deal with real danger once the Network stops playing around?

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]: Starting with Chapter 13 of Volume 4

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2025
Author: AmthraxOriginal

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 264
Views: 203,259

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Community Reviews(5)

JustanovelreadingguyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good job author, I can see so much hardwork put into the story. Though I don't understand lack of views. Please carry on the story.
Okay coming to style, writing style is good so far, I don't find any major putoffs no major errors and kind of uncommon narration.
Story: the story is not super dark which i usually find in all stories in this genere, plenty dark but not too much, it gives a sense of realism (not from get to go but from like 3-5 chapters into the story). For those who want a suffering MC with edgelord aura you are not going to get that no instant op or something. Chapter length is hefty, which I find it very very good.
Grammer: no major issues, readable and understable.
MC character is realistic atleast like a normal human, you wouldnt find some twisted personality which is fine I guess, he is not superpower hungry but realistic about danger not jumping headfirst and hoping for luck. I find some things offputting about MC, he was introduced as green Beret but I felt like this was not much related until book 2, may be it would be normal in mumbojumbo situation still I think author could have given him some more grittier personality.
Good job bro, appriciate your work.
egentzRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Truly enjoyed meeting and watching the characters develop. Love the detailed descriptions and the adventures of the characters. The references to pop culture are creative and make me laugh. The setting in the alternative universe is well developed and clearly defined. Looking forward to reading the next installment!! Great Book!
twoforcememberRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like the concept, and is a great start. I have read up through chapter 4ish now, and am interested to see where it goes! I am hoping Alan keeps up to his shenanigans. I have read many litrpg, and very few of them start out with a character that already is a beast (Green Beret).
Follow up: Now that I am through the first book and caught up in the second, I can say I cant get enough. I basically stop whatever I am doing to see where this is going next. Alan's development is great in a not-op sort of way. The writing has gotten even more interesting as the author has more characters to play with and bounce off each other (sometimes more literally than others :) )
Keep it up! I would say write faster, but I know quality takes time!
Doomed BobbyRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
It starts out ok. MC is supposed to be some badass. Closer to someone right out of basic instead. In the beginning it is still pretty good but by the end of book 1 it get allot harder to overlook the dumb and bad parts. With a few changes and polishing i think it could easily be A or S tier but right now it's C maybe B
AbhainnRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
This book suffers from the all too common mistake of over inflating the competence of the main character. He is supposed to be a green beret veteran of 10 years and have been trained as a doctor and astronaut. He exhibits approximately none of these skills. He could maybe pass for a combat medic fresh out of basic training at best. It's not an inherently bad novel. And the grammar is fine. But we are presented with a hyper competent character who keeps making rookie mistakes and that really breaks immersion. If his background was rewritten as a fresh recruit then I would give this book 4.5 stars. But as it is, it is painful to read. Especially as he keeps bringing up his own supposed competence and past experience.