Silks and Ash

Self-Published

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Hello everyone this is my second fiction this one I plan on completing as I'm taking my time and actually taking my time and thinking about where I want the story to go.A navy seal dies after he and his team complete dangerous mission that could change the world. Is given a second chance by rude bored gods. He is reborn as the daughter of prim minister of war. Will he perish in the politics of this new world or will he conquer over these snakes and spiders

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: shadow mouse

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 104
Views: 38,642

Chapters(15 total)

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AnarakRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Love how you did the brothers point of view and gave a bigger outlook on how mc reacts to others and the training regimen. if you decide to keep doing pov change i would try to keep them spaced between ch, like every 5-7 and add a couple sides in there as well.
But defiantly a nice change of pace, i would also love to see how the world is reacting to her new innovation in a greater depth not just from her family or servants stand point. While i was looking at some new additions to the review board such as @Balmik, he/she made some great points on adding more characters to the story and giving mc a rival or some form of interference with her plans.
But alas don’t just chuck out characters left and right the ones you do bring out need to have depth and a type of connection to the readers. This would be a great place to bring in side story’s after introducing them by giving them some backstory and a kind of standpoint on how there interaction with mc change.
Again as always loving the story keep on trucking, @Zekean