Shrouded in the Sun

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Hu Li was a fox from the immortal realm, Heaven, but had been accused of being a traitor to the emperor. Stuck in the mortal realm, Hu Li decides to continue life as a human boy, and learns more about the changes in the mortal world since the last time it has visited.

Armed with nothing but its minor shape-shifting powers, Hu Li faces the heavens and the earth as war brews in the immortal realm.

This is just a reminder of sorts: this is my first work on this website, and will be glad to take critisizm. But please keep in mind that I will make mistakes throughout the story, and may not be able to update as often as any of you would like. Thank you!

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  • Write with CelineRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This story starts with an incredibly strong hook! The opening scene of the fox being cast down by the emperor was vivid and emotional. I love the way the world feels alive and the tension is set from the start. The writing style flows smoothly, and the premise has so much potential for drama and growth. Can’t wait to see how the character adapts to the mortal world. Definitely adding this to my reading list!