Short thoughts
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A mouse, a narrator and and author, all wrapped up into a story that just doesn't make sense. Will you read it?
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- wiselibrarian
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 441
Chapters(1 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- 1Royal Road★★★★ 3.5This short story was told from a very odd perspective, and had some very odd characters. The sentances were all clumped together in a giant paragraph, and combined with a lack of proper punctuation, it made this story very heard to understand. Dialogue was also somewhat problematic, it was hard to discern who was talking to who. Overall, this could use some polishing, but it's not awful.