Short stories

Self-Published

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The sole purpose of this book is to train my writing.

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ajrswim2000Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a cute little short story or scene.
Shrike LawRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I've read the first story and some of the second so most of this applies to both if not more of the stories.
The beginning of the story was very enjoyable and intriguing! Overall It was nice but some confusion made it hard to follow.
Story- There was some story but since there isn't a lot of words in a short story that allow you to have a very developed story, it ws fairly good but towards the end and the dagger scene it was personaly a bit confusing as to what was going on. I think the MC betrayed the brutish guy and became evil and achieved true necromancy, as to wether it ws his plan or not iI do not know. The ending could have used some clearing up.
Character - The character wasn't particulary unique but I could tell he had a somewhat developed past and thoughts and motivations. The personality was still shown as being meek and cowardly through his actions and speech
Grammer - Grammar was perfect and flowed together nicely, It's clear that the author has a good grasp of the english language there may have been an error or two that I didn't catch but nothing drew me out of the story..
Style- The style is distinct with more advanced language than typical and detailed descriptions but the style is moreso of a genre of writing rather than a style specific to an author.
I'm hoping I didn't write anything harshly since I am very grateful for the story!