Shinome

Self-Published

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Description

Damian has the perfect family life. He never had problems with the way how his life was going. But it is said that circumstances can change very quickly. Damian will face ups and downs, and with new people entering his life, the plot of his life thickens. Damian will learn several lessons from what not to say to a girl to who he can trust. He better find a way to deal with life quick because as bumpy as his life seems at the present it won't get smoother.

Note: I may cease to write newer chapters soon. This story was a test of certain ideas that I will be putting to use in a new book that I will be writing.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
Brotastic1212

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYCOMEDYSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSSCHOOL LIFEMALE LEADKINGDOM BUILDING

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.8/ 5.0
Followers
4
Views
1,463

Chapters(6 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • BronnyBRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The 5th Chapter Kenkyo, was really enjoyable. Loved the humor and the explanation of the power system of the fictional world within the story. Still enjoying how the characters bounce of one another and the varying personalities. I like where this story is going. It is also admirable, on the amount of word count there is for each and every chapter, no less than one thousand words for each, it is honestly distressing when there is not much to read.
    As for the overall story, world building is excellent and interesting. Scenes are very vivid and well written. The dialougue is contrsucted very well and it seems meaningful as it allows the readers to learn about the way certain characters think, their temperament and overall personality.
    The fight scenes are well choreographed. The names for certain things in the story are well though out, carry an actual meaning and do not just sound cool. The pacing has slowed down after the first chapter which is good because the characters are fleshed out more. Overall I like everything about this story and you will to if you enjoy a smart witty main character with a good supporting cast that seem useful and a wide character personality palate.
  • FrannieRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I think this story has a great premise but the pacing was a little bit to fast for my taste. It is very descriptive expecially with the fight sequences which are very exciting but can be lengthy. The cast of characters are interestingly written and are varied and the world building is unique.