Shifting Tunnels
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The tale of a shape-shifting monster born into a young dungeon. Having been created in a rush from the corpse of the dungeons past victim. The young monster posses a will separate to that of the dungeon it was created in, as well as access to the system. But, due to this, are under constant threat of both invaders and the dungeon it serves.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- agregsdfegrethserb
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 19
- Views
- 4,141
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- Noah NightshardRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Review at the Chapter 6
It's a good read overall. I recommend it.
Style : The style is neither good not bad. It's what you find everywhere. But it's always better than an original but bad style.
Story : A good story thus far. The world is nicely presented.The info dumps are finely managed. And above all, the idea of a dungeon monster as a hero is extremely original. I don't say I have read all the novels on this site but it's the first story I've found that make use of this idea and doesn't flunk itself. I give this four stars.
Grammar : It's the worst part of this novel. It's still better than the MTL but not by a large margin. It takes me two chapters to make out that "highers" is used instead of "hires". And the manners to index the MC is so disturbing, you'll need at least two reads to make it out. You'll directly know this isn't a shakespearien work. So if you're not allergic to language' faults, you're welcome.
Character : Thus far, they haven't been a lot of meaningful characters. So this part of my review may be a little biased. I like the MC. He don't know anything thus his reaction are ruthless and heartless. His definition of good and bad is actually rudimentary but I like it as it is. So it's highly possible that I will hate it later. The dungeon core isn't some reincarnated dude but still act like a cynical and hasty neet. It's still bearable since the majority of its acts are logicals.Spoiler: Spoiler
If you have a risk of being betrayed by a sentient monster, you should deal with it asap but nobody is perfect.
The humans are thus far rather cliché but it's bearable.
Overall it's a great novel if you don't bother some grammar flaws.