Shift (Ben 10+DCU Fanfiction)

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Omnitrix+ DCU, what's not to like? The main character will not be Ben Tennyson, rather someone from our world who gains the Omnitrix

Hello! This fanfiction Shift is what I wanted to do for an homage to what I thought were underrated pieces of media, Ben 10 and some DCU characters. However, I would be remiss if I didn’t add context to two of the major works that inspired Shift, Dial, and A Practical Guide to Evil. Dial is another ben 10 fanfiction, however that story takes place in the MCU, and with an adult that is already a grown-up at the beginning of the story. Dial, by my own accounts, ismore superficially  Like shift, even though the Omnitrix is a central device in both. My protagonist starts out around 18 years old, so is less serious and can build relationships with some of the junior justice league members, and then later on in the story meet the Justice League officially.  The tone will be more light-hearted at the beginning of the story as teenagers are known to use sarcasm and jokes at each other’s expense. Furthermore, in Dial, the protagonist has a well-developed knowledge of the MCU which he uses to have knowledge on events and characters, that the character in Shift will not have. While the MC will have some knowledge of people's abilities, lesser-known characters and people's real identities will be not included as much, but the MC of Shift will have some knowledge. APGTE's influence is deeper than Dials'. The epigraphs at the beginning of every chapter are an example of that, a place for light-hearted jokes and worldbuilding that's not pure exposition, but I also want to incorporate narrative stories to Shift (heroes win more than lose, providence, etc) on a lighthearted scale. While the heroes of Shift will have to work to win against villains, the MC of Shift will be allowed limited precognition, through narratives tropes and archetypes as a trade-off of less knowledge of the DCU. For example, a villain a hero faces might monologue, but the MC will not instinctively know how to counter every villain they encounter. I also wanted to bring in more realism than usual superhero stories, ie: the MC cannot just walk and have a meeting with Batman or Superman, he would have to “work his way up” in terms of credibility and whatnot. The Aliens that show up in Shift I tried to make different than the ones in Dial, just to share the love for lesser-known characters. And to make it fairer for the villains of the DCU, the main character will not wantonly use if gain at all an Alien X or a ben 10 form of Kryptonians, just so the characters have to work a little bit for victory. I urge anyone reading to consider checking out both APGTE and Dial as they are both amazing works, and I hope you enjoy them. The beginning of how the MC enters the DCU will not be as important as him actually existing in that universe, so that is why a ton of time is not spent on that part of the story. Chapters will be around 2.5 thousand words and come out around every weekday.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2022

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
134
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43,758

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • megamind367Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    First of all, I love the mix of Ben 10 and DCU; the character development through the writing style is really on point and super descriptive and plus you get actual DCU and Ben 10 characters. I also really love the epilogues that go with each chapter cause it has some niche connection to every chapter. Most of the time the chapters end really well, often with a cliffhanger since each chapter is something pog and new. It really screams fan fiction btw so if you are into that, do check it out. Plus the fact that you get a chapter a day saves my impatient self. I really love it so far :)
  • ThouWhoShallNotBeNamedRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The idea is enjoyable but the writing is subpar, written as a fan fiction and not a novel, and while it may seem contradictive considering that this is a fan fiction. The difference is in a novel the characters flow and interact, not overtly put any singular part or character on some form of pedestal, it tells a tale that the author hold control over and builds unto his own. Even if the kingdom is built in the honour or likeness of another it should always should feel smooth even with new elements added. A ben 10 fanfiction that is truely a novel is dial, it doesn't overtly fangirl or powerboner its way through the story it just flows.
    This story puts itself firmly in the fan fiction division where you can feel foregien elements have been added to an established kingdom and some how both fangirls over existing characters and tries to power boner its way into the story with a main character that has underserved power and glaring weakness that will either have to be plot armoured through or forcibly fixed "training" in time frames that are pitiful. The whole overtly egotistical prologue doesn't really add much to the story just makes the MC into a messiah of sorts that is completely unnessary because their are plenty of DC characters that could fill all any any shoes need to fill to prevent multiversal destruction easily or mop up all the little villians so that the big guns can focus on big problems(not too clear on that one).
    Overall just some average powerboner novice writer, delivering nobrainer reading(not claiming to be any better afterall I did read)