Shattered Soul

Self-Published

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Description

In a world where power rules...The strongest survive....A treacherous plot...a dangerous mishap...One of the greatest and most powerfull Immortal God ever ,shatters his soul losing all his power and cultivation due to trickery and treachery.Finding himself back to square one , follow his journey to achieve what was lost and regain his soul, his power ,his respect and most importantly "" the dish that is best served cold - Revenge"Well this is my first time writing.So please bear with me over mistakes and of course the ever troubling grammar.Feel free to correct.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Invixtus

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 773
Views: 179,708

Chapters(47 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

Endless PavingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
(Chapter 17, four-ish days per update)
A great story so far about two or more people who are the same person. They are in the same body as well, for convenience. Some words are slightly misspelled into the kind of words that actully are words despite being the weongs ones. Not all readers will notice this as much as others, and only some will really be bothered to care. The story style is a normal young adult style thriller with the sudden fantastical world, personal revalation, and ominous hordes thing. It’s not too generic since it has some interesting mind/soul finickery, but people without patience for that type of plot will have to miss out on the fun. The highest recomemdation from me is the characters, as they are very engaging and well defined for how far I am in the story already. We’ve got all the good feels: anxiety, guilt, trauma, determination, happiness. All that good stuff, not those stupid characters that never juggle their feelings and work on a one-track emotion. Dynamic feelings.
LordmodRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
As far as I have read, chapter 24, the author is really good at writing! I am especially happy, that he doesn't shy away to also include rather dark themes for fear of losing followers. To draw a realistic picture of a world in the middle ages it is only natural to also include the darkness these times consisted of.
Those things are also included in Game of Thrones, and this series is liked by many especially because the author doesn't create a rainbow world but a reality. So whoever starts reading this should also be prepared for death and that things actually can go wrong.
The story has dept, the character developement is good and the grammar is as far as I can tell almost as good as a native speaker, but since I am not one myself I am qualified to judge it. But the point is, you understand everything and can get immersed in the story.
I give it 5 stars for now, since so far it is in my opinion as good.
SinderRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Echoing BLOO233
Up to chapter 16, easy to read and enjoyable!
bloo233Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Awesome story, this reads a lot like an actual high fantasy story you can find in a bookstore. I could tell the effort the author put into the world building here. It's interesting to read about and it gives me the 'begining of an epic adventure' kind of feel. Only 11 chapters in, but that was enough to totally captivate me.
Grammar wise, I had no problems reading the story. Couldn't even tell that english wasn't your first language.
I hope to see more!
crusaderbondRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I assume since the mc's are fragmented pieces of a soul, they always felt like something was missing or whatever. I really like the story but the thought of having to share a body with someone else gives me chills.
It's very good though, give it a go!
marsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Grammar:-
This story has wonderful grammar with barely any mistakes the few there are (hence the score) are mostly minor spelling mistakes eg using shot instead of shoot, not much else to say since it does everything else well in regards to this.
Style:-
It does well with it’s prose occasionally stumbling where it feels long winded at times and condensed in others, for the most part however it knows what it’s doing and does it well.
Characters:-
Every character shown so far has either been 3 dimensional or shows that they have depth further than what it seems from side characters to random prostitutes, they may not all be likeable but they certainly have character not to mention their own stories.
Story:-
Not much to say here it has a place where it is, it has a place where it’s going and a place where it was, there’s drama and battle, pain and hope the only negatives i have on this are where it seems that most male characters don’t have much involvement or good in them otherwise I won’t fault it for not having romance, it’s not necessary. Otherwise it just feels that there’s not much progress when it comes to the shattered soul but there is still story progression and good story at that hence it still deserves its score.
Overall just a good read, as of Arc 2 Ch9
Wille1412Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I like this novel a lot, I wouldn't say the story is amazing, but it's definitely good, and best of all, it feels fresh. I have never read a story like this before, and I must say that I am enjoying it.
MaiMeeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
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Nothing to write. No grammar mistakes found—though I haven't looked for it. There isn't really enough chapters to write anything concrete. I'd like to see a lesbian/yuri/GL/whatever you call it tag if the story really goes that way though.
KenozaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Spoiler in case somebody hated slavery, slave collar, and tragedy.
Right in the end of arc 1. Mc and her sister got captured as slaves. Implications for sister to be raped. Idk, about mc. Implications for slave collar can seal power and control mind. If you can't handle that. Don't read it. I really hated this kind of think.