A samurai newly appointed at the castle is met with devastation as the other night it is attacked..........the survival is the thinnest thing in face of danger. The journey starts....

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Alexander the great (LOL)Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

The story's start is good , but the chats are slow so its going off a bit and becoming a bit bored but from the second chapter , its going good enough , the death of the lord and the invasion is good , i see how the author has changed his style in the coming chapters , like the endings of a chapter , he used to just cut off the chapter but in the coming new chapters , he is giving a proper suspense and that's good , it is good , and its facinating how a new author , in just 24 hours of submission is getting good at this,would like to see more and the way the new characters are introduced can be improved a bit , it was improved in the upcoming chapters , it good , and the way the scene plays in the second chapter is good but you should not write to epress how the charaters feel but show it by their actions. The grammer is surprisingly good enough , and the style is also good but needs a bit of improvement , good luck in anything you do author , you are new but you will adapt.

Redo readerRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

The character base is really cool , its development starts in a good pace but the sudden turn in the second chapter is quite good , the fights and the escape was also great , liked the way the characters are entering the scenes , like suppose the 6th chapter , the villagers were more like animals at the beginning but they were actually villagers , but it would need more improvement , for now , yes , to get more readers

Shadows of Ruin

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