Seventh reincarnation is as a dungeon
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Description
Making god angry is bad idea. Especially if it's overworked goddess of reincarnation. Even if bound by law she still will find a way to get back at you. So no great luxury and power for you. Only eternal reincarnation and what you will be able get your self. And this time you ended as a dungeon.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Rafan
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 66
- Views
- 19,413
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Morg87Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Good plot, especially liked the detail with the pop grape in giving the character an explanation why he chose it.
Bad grammer I can read it but I have to think about what you were trying to say for a moment or two, but if it isn't your first language I can understand the trouble you have with it. - Ult the DreamerRoyal Road★★ 1.5Interesting idea and I'd have loved to see it keep going. But beyond that it's pretty bad.
Grammar, spelling, duplicate passages, etc. Very troublesome to actually read it all and if I had more options I haven't already read I'd never have bothered.
Only leaving the review because I think if the author learned to write properly they might come up with something good. A decent story is the hardest part, spelling and grammar is just a matter of practice and knowing the language well. - Grim6Royal Road★ 0.5I couldn't even finish the first chapter the grammar is absolutely atrocious. The concept was interesting but the grammar. If you used google translate it would make it more readable. No matter how bad your English is if it's this bad you shouldn't be writing.