There was a voice in his head. Jaune wasn't crazy, probably, that just happened to be his semblance. A semblance that knows all sorts of odd things. People he's never met. Secrets he should never know. What is Jaune meant to do when this voice starts giving him warnings of the future?

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Astral CrystalRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Style: The style is excellent, it's easy to understand what's happening and the pacing is good. I also think the various povs are handled very well considering the large amount of important characters in the story, each pov is like a puzzle piece which allows you to get more of the bigger picture.
Story: The story is great, it's very fun and entertaining while having some more emotional moments. The way the semblance uses his knowledge to affect the plot and events in the story is very interesting since he doesn't say everything he knows.
Grammar: The grammar is excellent, I don't remember seeing any errors.
Character: The characters are great and the way Jaune and his semblance interact is very entertaining although it can be a tad bit annoying that the semblance keeps a lot of his information to himself. The other characters are great as well and I feel they are portrayed well. We even get to see the perspective of characters which usually aren't seen a lot in RWBY fanfic. The interactions characters have with each other and the way they react to the knowledge the semblance has is great I love it.
In conclusion this is a very fun RWBY fanfic and transmigrator story, it reminds me a lot of the most popular RWBY and I really like it, can't wait to see more.

Pick Ye RosebudsRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Well written and engaging! A startling lack of fight scenes and combat for both the setting and RWBY fics in general, without losing any of what makes it interesting. The humour is entertaining, the advice is sound, the characters very much feel like themselves (if a little more verbose than expected, sometimes) 10/10, would read at 7 am again

CaduceusRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

A pretty good fanfic. Believable reactions from characters, good progression, good style and no grammar errors that I could see.
Only reducing half a star because I think that people's reactions to Second's weirdness are a bit too convenient but it is fine. More of a 4.75/5 than anything as far as I am concerned.

Eli1012101Royal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

Nothing particularly groundbreaking, but a well made fanfic involving the RWBY universe and someone with an abundance of setting knowledge trying to nudge things in a better direction for the characters. Its got a neat twist in that our protagonist cant directly affect things too much, and beyond that he's just.... a guy.

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