Secrets of Atlan I: Genesis of Secrets

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Description

The Atlans disappeared milennia ago - now the fate of the world may require unearthing the secrets buried with them.

In the kingdom of Trideria, an unseen evil is growing in power. Having uncovered the seeds of truth, it is up to Darius and his companions to find the secrets of the ancients once known as the Atlans and stop the coming darkness before it overtakes all of Aralistra.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: JLWalker

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Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 2
Views: 2,641

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Reijix the UnbrokenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very engaging story with a plot with a well thought out history and very engaging and deep character backstories. As a child, this story was an inspiration, even in it's unfinished and rough form. I've always wanted to see it finished and I can't wait for the next chapters and beyond
M.E. CheRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Secrets of Atlan opens with an engaging hook that immediately draws readers into its world. The story efficiently establishes its main characters, providing insight into their personalities while setting up both immediate and long-term stakes.
The world-building is particularly well-handled, with information naturally woven into the narrative through believable dialogue and organic storytelling. The author skillfully uses character interactions, such as children's questions, as natural prompts for exposition.
Character interactions feel authentic and grounded, with individuals reacting naturally to events rather than forcing plot progression. The dialogue flows smoothly, effectively conveying character without becoming convoluted.
While the story incorporates familiar fantasy elements, its technical proficiency in storytelling and writing sets it apart. The author has crafted a believable world, even as its full rules and systems are gradually revealed.
The first three chapters form a cohesive mini-arc that introduces the world, establishes stakes, and sets up intriguing potential directions. Hints of portal fantasy and sci-fi elements emerge, though the story remains firmly rooted in its fantasy foundation.
The protagonist is immediately likeable, and the stakes are both understandable and relatable. The story strikes an excellent balance between revealing information and maintaining mystery, leaving breadcrumbs for larger world-building without overwhelming the reader.
Overall, Secrets of Atlan presents a solid foundation for an engaging fantasy narrative, supported by strong technical writing and natural character dynamics.