Second Life, I'll make it my best

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Description

Ray Smith was just a Software Engineer living out his boring everyday life until one day something weird happened... he died. After waking up alive again in a strange new world. To make matters even weirder, he found himself with the body and memories of his high-leveled tabletop rpg character, Akil. With the help of some NPCs that Ray and his friends had made that had now become real, Ray/Akil need to find out why and how he was transported to this world. Akil wants to find out whether he was real or just the fantasy of a Ray’s.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: SecondLifeBestLife

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 46
Views: 9,794

Chapters(18 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

BlueSilver23Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's an amazing story so far, I am excited to read more. Please keep writing more! I love the world you are creating and the magical elements in place. It is the perfect mixture of imagination, mystery, magic and adventure! The way you describe the world and characters make a very vivid mental picture for those who like to get lost in the world of reading!
McWuffelpuffRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Story started interesting, grammar and Overall quality increase vastly within the first chapters.
Isekaid in homegrown Tabletop combining several rulesets, you should be basically familiar with tt games to make "8th Circle" and spellnames more logical, but its not necessary.
The first two or three chapters are a bit hard to read, but the writing improves very quickly. Thankfully the author decided to Change the Dialogue, makes it way easier to read.
In the beginning the"dialogues" are a collection of statements and the early characters appear cliché.
Minor Spoiler ahead!
The "real characters" not from mcs school are way more fleshed out and better written.
No Blue Boxes, Spellnames are rather self explaining. Character interactions are a little bit forced, mc does or says something, everybody accepts it and swoons.
Feels very much like someone watched Overlord and decided to write a story, give it at least five chapters and i am sure it will grow on you, as it did on me.
I am very much looking forward to See how the Story develops, where the author will combine the different open elements and if there is a higher reason for everything that happens.
You can feel the way the author gets better wirh each chapter.