Second Chance At Life As A Godkin.

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Follow Jak as he is given a second chance at life in a different world, filled with magic and swords, because of his good deeds. But, he begged God if he could be OP, so he could do whatever he wanted. God seeing Jaks records of good deeds during his life at Earth, thought that it wasn't something too big to ask for, so he granted his wish. God made Jak reborn into the ancient and extinct race of Godkins. Who were pretty much Gods..

Now Follow Jak as he travels through this new world doing whatever he wants, creating subordinates out of thin air, creating his own empire, traveling the world and more.

(Hey ya'll this is my first stroy, and hope you don't mind my grammar, for English is not my mother tongue. But anyways, during my days I have read a lot of op mc's, and I love it! So I thought I would try and write one. However, warning to those who want to read this, this is just for fun and it's pretty much a wish fulfillment. You have been warned. Anyways I hope you guys enjoy the story! And thanks for reading!)

*If the owner of this cover wants me to put it down, just holla and I'll do it :)*

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Heart-burstRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I think that novel was not designed to make big brain usefull but to be easy and fun to read, it is a success for now (chap2) I would just kindly remind the author
    1)don't let everybody influence you, only think about negative review if they are constructive and Writen with the intent to help you, most people that read it like the story but don't always take the time to write a little message in the comments
    2)try to have a plan to where the story is supposed to go (not extremely detailed, more like a squeletton, you will add the meat and the skin later) most of people who don't do that end with story that feel like the event's that happen are forced (they need to evade a dead end at the last minute, it just feel wrong) because you can't have a hero die(for exemple, plot armor is a flaw in planning ahead, but you shouldn't have the problem of your mc needing author sized help to escape dying, unless you fuck up real bad)
    3)in the future whatever happen please don't rewrite everything (at most a part at the beginning) I read a shot load of story and I think that worked twice in the 30+ books that tried it, it's so boring when you already know how the story is supposed to happen, authors give up, so please don't kill the story
    That's all have a good day
    Ps:I like it, keep writing