Sea Paradise

Self-Published

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Description

! (TEMPORARY HIATUS) !Every 70 years flying fish come from the magical place called ‘’Sea Paradise’’, a paradise that all fishers dream of visiting. Tono Toshiro, a grandfather also had the same dream but sadly died. Now Hayato, a 20 year old fisher, wants to fulfill his grandfather's dream by visiting the Sea Paradise, but what obstacles does Hayato have to face to reach that goal, and does he have what it takes to do so?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
10,995

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • HassanFarstastrandRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    **OVERALL**
    The story is good with nice early on character development. Chapter one and two are a bit boring, however chapter three and four (aka all chapters up-to-date at the time of this review) are definetely worth a read, as that's where all the interesting things happen.
    You get a nice feeling of suspense and tension while reading chapter three and four. You definetely feel the mood while reading and you get to know how everyone in the room feels. The small details, such as the security, help set the mood and show that the place is really strict.
    **CHARACTERS**
    The main portagonist, Hayato, has many flaws of his own and is constantly working to improve them. In chapter three, we get to know that Hayato has no special abilities other than what his grandfather taught him. This allows for great character growth in the future as we can track his improvements.
    The main antagonist, Ryuu, is a typical villain-like character. He is super powerful, scary and he is short tempered. He bears a grudge against Hayato for daring to stand against.
    The second portagonist, Shoji, only appears for a short while. We get to see how Shoji feels about Hayato when they switch perspective, there is not much other than that to know about him tho.
    **GRAMMAR AND STYLE**
    There isn't much to say here. You can expect the grammar to be slightly flawed, however you have to consider the fact that the author is probably busy with things in real life and that he is probably not from an english speaking country.
    I really love the style the light novel is written in, it swaps perspective sometimes which allows us to emphasize with the characters. We get to know how other characters view Hayato and how they feel around him.
    I do think the cover can get some improvements though.
    **FUTURE POTENTIAL**
    The series definetely has a lot of potential since we still don't know whats on the giant fish. If the author of this series develops it well, which he most likely will, the serie will become much better