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Zao kazuya who is a military vehicle obsessed 16 year old boy was supposed to live to the tender age of 80 when an unexpected accident happened. This caused him to reincarnate in another world. Follow him on his journey to see whether science or magic prevails._________________________________________________________________________________________________P.S first time writing a fiction. Don't expect too much!

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MarcishereRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

I believe the author has good sentence structure as well as good punctuation which is always a good start now with the story itself has potential if it's lacking anything maybe depth of character the devil is in the details and all that but the story is good as long as the mc is NOT spoon fed all her powers abilities ect you have the makings of a great story an mc that struggles and has to fight for power, acknowledment, ect makes the story more engaging so keep that in mind author-san.
ps: love the fact that truck-San strikes again in a more creative way haha

alexanderyouRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

Overall the story is pretty interesting in its setup and main plot points, but the plot progresses far too fast. The amount of plot covered would easily fit a story 2-3 times longer, and it feels awkward at times when you have to read a paragraph a couple times because it somehow described what would normally be most of a normal length chapter.

HoriusRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

This story doesn’t deserve a full review or even rant, so I keep it short.
The style is bad.
The story is basically your usual reincarnation story, but very sloppily made. How sloppily? In the first chapter is a info-dump which you can entirely skip without missing anything important. Great. Messing such an easy concept is pretty amazing.
The grammar in this story costed me quite many hairs, it’s quite nerve-cracking. A creepy-pasta for each and every grammar-nazi. Alone seeing that every single ‘I’ is instead a ‘i’ – even at the beginning of a sentence – is terrifying. And don’t dare to throw the “English is my second language” excuse, this is also true for me. Don’t make foreign countries look bad.
The characters make no sense. The king – a apparently doting father – allows himself to be seperated from his first daughter and even tolerates her slave-like treatment by his wife’s wish. The queen mistreats her first daughter because being a variant for their species. The daughter’s first and so far (chapter 8) only friend, which is apparently a vampir in a beastmen society, respects assumely the royal family so much that she really wanted to see the prince and princess, but dares to suck the blood of the first princess against her will.
And worst of all? This story destroys the whole fantasy setting. The main character can create science fiction weapons, the God is an ill-spirited and vengeful cross-dresser (which, I don’t know how, isn’t funny), and many, many more attrocities for every fantasy lover. That I’m not a fan is a understatement, needless to say.

Science or magic or both?

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