Savior: Tamashi's Story

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

- previously known as Savior: A Love Story -

When Tamashi sees a girl about to get run over by a truck, he does what any selfless person would do before thinking: he tries to push her out of the way.

He closes his eyes and reopens them: to find himself in a vast void, stuck there with a being that’s nearly his own reflection.

The only difference? That being’s hair was completely white. Side note: he’s also kind of an arrogant jerk.

Tamashi wakes up to find that he successfully saved the girl: except, someone shows up and accuses him of murder.

What the hell?

This is the story of Tamashi, and his journey to redeem himself and to to find out the truth of the world he lives in.

As it turns out, there’s more to society and the world than the eye can see.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021

Royal Road Stats

Rating
2.2/ 5.0
Followers
12
Views
9,638

Chapters(33 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • AwakenedMuseRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Style
    The writer promises an anime story and delivers well. The chapters read like episodes of a show, complete with a short intro section to each chapter before the title, and continuing after. The pacing is fast, and each chapter is a quick read. I would like to see more descriptions of what is happening and what the setting looks like. The dialogue is good though, that seems to be the author's focus.
    Story
    The story seems fairly typical for an anime so far. The hero starts out as a regular 16 year old high school boy before a sequence of events changes his life forever. Still, just because it's a bread-and-butter anime story doesn't mean there aren't unique twists and elements to the plot!
    Grammar
    The grammar is solid and very readable. There are some mistakes and mispellings, but nothing that impacts readability.
    Character
    I like the characters so far. The hero is a typical boy, but his group of friends are all well developed and unique. The villains are a bit one dimmensional so far, particularly an assassin in recent chapters. Showing more about their motivations would be helpful. It's early in the story, so the author can't give away too much yet, but this would be an area to improve!
    Overall
    This is a solid anime story, and a quick read. I hope the writer continues with it and finds a good audience for their work. The story is very fast paced, and reads easily. Worth taking a few minutes to check it out!