Sangreville
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
While this novella is a "Supernatural/Suspense/Thriller", it is also a "Coming of Age" tale. It concerns a "naughty" high school girls, who is doing things which she knows that she shouldn't. By the end of the story, she has become a responsible young woman, who is forced to deal with responsibilities, which she would prefer to avoid, but is unable to do so.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- MrBillyD
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 7,687
Chapters(14 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(1)
- HanmengRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Review based on reading as far as Chapter 5
Style
The story runs smooth. It easy to picture how things happened one after another. I can easily enjoy reading the story.
Grammar
I decided to give the perfect rating in this aspect. Anyone's grammar here is better than me.
Story
It's so smooth that I got sleepy after I read it for a while. I can't sense any danger or crisis. It's a long nice peaceful ride.
Character
I don't feel any sympathy for the protagonist. Even with the inner self-monologue, I can't find a certain depth to her character. Maybe, I have to dig further in order to find her appeal, but she doesn't give me any reason to keep digging.
I think both character and plot need some polishing. Some hints should be spread around to entice the reader to keep going. Just my two cents though, I don't know enough about writing to advise actually.
I think the premise is interesting and hope the writer keep on working on it and bring out the charm of this story and its characters.