Sand And Spite: A Dungeoncore Story
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Lost among the Endless Sands, a Dungeon begins to grow-"Wait, you dropped us in the Desert?""You said you didn't want to deal with people!"-And it's caretakers face a great many obstacles.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- RogueDruid51
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 96
- Views
- 9,851
Chapters(7 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- 1Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is one of the more humorous and light Dungeon Core stories, with a big focus on the two main characters through dynamic dialogue. Growing a dungeon far away from any people will be hard, but I have faith that they will find a way. System/LitRPG aspects find a happy balance of not being too overdone, while giving enough information for the story to make sense. I'm enjoying the story, and while I may be biased in my love for the genre, I do think this is quite good in it's own right.
- Bluebloom25Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5Only 4 chapters and it is going great. I am enjoying the story so far and will continue to read as the author updates!
The pacing is slow going but is the perfect pacing for the premise of being in the middle of nowhere with no one coming any time soon, which is an exciting premise. I have seen it attempted before, but the authors always seem to rush until they can get people/adventures to discover the dungeon and skip over the building/beginning, so going slow is fine by me!
I wish there is more background on our dungeon, the mysterious god and just the world in general. The dynamic between the main characters is so fun to read but we know almost nothing about them, their dialogue seems to hint at more background but we have next nothing to show for it. We are getting world-building in the most recent chapter so I have hope that more fleshing out will be coming soon.
Another thing is I wish there is more descriptions about how the building is going/looking as that is what I enjoy most about dungeon core stories.
Overall, a wonderful story with an interesting premise by a fantastic author whose stories I have enjoyed before! - magical heartRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This seems to be a good start to a dungeon core story. obviously not much yet has been written and so I'll give a more detailed description once there is more material. I think the author is doing well with setting up the core and their helper's relationship. And there is been just enough world-building to be interesting without there being an exposition dumb.