Salvos is a ant but no ordinary ant he/she can become a Queen Ant because he/she doesn't have a gender.

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MelasDeltaRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

This is a story about an ant named Salvos.
It is a unique take on the Monster Evolution LitRPG genre with a protagonist that is actually genderfluid. A bold take, especially in a website with a readerbase that is typically gender-binary conformative. But this is not just meaningless representation in your entertainment media, since it actually serves a purpose in-story. You see, due to his/her genderfluid nature, he/she is able to become an incredibly rare and unique Queen Ant.
Right now, there are still a lot of mysteries in regards to Queen Ants, but I say that adds to the story rather than detract from it. It raises questions which you want answered and makes the story more intriguing.
Furthermore, Salvos, the main character, is not a simple one dimensional character whose only trait is being genderfluid. He/she is incredibly intelligent. I would personally say, a genius.
The grammar is good, I didn't see any errors in the chapter itself. Unfortunately, I spotted a minor typo in the synopsis, which leads me to detract a single 0.5 from the grammar score. However, if the author proves dilligent in fixing future such typos, I may raise the score from a 4.5 to a 5/5.
Forewarning, as of the review, there is only one chapter in the novel, Salvos.

TajarimRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Has the same name as one of my favorite stories, tables and - probably - even a character somewhere . Plot - as of this review- is kind of light, but might develop into something maybe . Chapter length is a bit heavy, so some readers might get spooked. Otherwise totally solid experience.

The CommentatorRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

This is a truly delightful work of fiction. I have never, not once in my life, read a fiction that has entertained me more than this. Let’s get right in to the review.
Grammar: Very easy to read, and represents the story incredibly well. I’d say it’s a perfect fit.
Style: The short paragraphs and chapters make this story a snack for the road. That is exactly the kind of thing this story needs.
Story: The plot is very well developed. The author is incredibly skilled at leaving clues oh where the story is going.
Characters: Amazing. We only have one so far, but they are truly a work of art. They, Salvos, are perfectly done.
And yeah, that’s my review. If you haven’t read this story, do it. I can garuntee that you won’t regret it.
not enough words apparently. Don’t read further, as this is just filler.
everyone gone? Good. Spooky scary skeletons send shivers down your spine. Shrieking skulls will shock your soul and seal your doom tonight. We’re so sorry skeletons, you’re so misunderstood. You only wish to socialize, but I don’t think you should.
Uh…
Come oh sailors, hear my music. Echoing through sea, and cove. Bring your hill into my harbor. Join the teaming wrecks below.

NyxiussRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

As of the latest chapter, everything in the story was well explained.
What I really liked was that the story skipped a lot of filler chapters and went straight to to point in every situation (reminder I am speaking as of the latest chapter, this may or may not change).
I have only one slight issue with this story, though this is more of a personal thing I suppose...
I cant read

BullerRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

Ignore title. Couldn't spell.
The premise itself seems okay-ish and the inclusion of tables is something everybody on RR likes(average speaking). Sentences? He/She/Duck throws one off but that's fine enough. Actual chapter contents are very bare with shorter format. And even then it was mostly table which took up space. Sentences... could use work but I have nothing against it. Perhaps make those shorter to cause less confusion for those skimming.
3/5 from me. Might improve later.

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