Saiyan In a Fantasy World
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Description
First of all I'm writing for fun and I do not have a set schedule. Secondly I am releasing the Prologue as a test and if it gets good reviews I will carry on writing . Also if haven’t read/watched Overlord or Dragon Ball then you probably won’t understand a lot of this so I recommend doing so. My native language is English but there will probably be some mistakes so let me know if you find any. This is my first fiction so any advice is welcomed.
Disclaimer:I do not own Dragon Ball or Overlord
Other Disclaimer: I also do not own the cover art. If the owner wants me to take it down please tell me and I will do so immediately.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- MemesMiester72
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 71
- Views
- 17,367
Chapters(9 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- Acolyte_of_cthulhuRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Seems it could be good slow down a little with the pace for other chapters and try to define it more.
- sundrawnshadowRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Good start I would say I'm glad you did not make him the best from the start I also agreed to what you said about being op other than that the writing seems to flow good as far as I can tell but keep in mind that if your going to kill someone we need to get attached to them and if you can give them a reason to not want to be revived by the dragonballs if their not needed at least until later and maybe make it temporary by saying that the dragon balls rely on your powerlevel or you need a amount of points to upgrade it to makeing them revive you could also maybe put limitations like the namek dragon balls had other than that keep it up!
- OwnaRoyal Road★ 0.5i read the start of your prologue and its garbage write the story or dont write it at all