Sage Zero

Self-Published

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Description

A red haired boy wakes up in a place he does not recognize to be honest he can't recognize anything but he's able to find out his name and hopefully figure out who he really is.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Marzocch1

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 2.3/ 5.0
Followers: 20
Views: 3,670

Chapters(10 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

TepperPepper666Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Nice to read when I was bored and did not have anything to do. I will be looking forward to new chapters.
Style for this is very recognizable and whatever parts were generated with artificial intelligence the author did a decent job at making it less obvious. The RPG elements for lack of a better term, work. Though generic at times (the concepts of one's various battle moves, mana reserves, various weapons, and all that), they do an adequate job at being part of the story.
The story itself is sufficiently engaging, with no parts in particular where I lost interest. Nothing really surprised me but there were certainly parts which amused me such as in chapter 16 (Bird Hunt) where Zero and his group try fighting that bird which keeps shouting “I’M THE BIGGEST BIRD! I’M THE BIGGEST BIRD!”
Grammar is passable, there were not any parts that were hard to read but there were sections where '.' and ',' were missing along with oddly placed spaces.
The characters are good in general, but Ushin in particular is what made me rate the character score 5 stars. I love her (is sassy the right term?) personality and how she behaves.