[S-41234 (DW-4)] or Trust me people it could be worse
Self-Published
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Description
Madeline was hoping for a much-deserved break from her tedious life, but her relaxing cruise through the stars is cut short when the ship is attacked, and she and the rest of the passengers evacuate to the uninhabited planet below.
With help a month away, she and her newfound friends must use all their ingenuity and determination to overcome the challenges the planet throws at them.
Though there may be more dangerous things roaming amongst the trees.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Aeogeus
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 26
- Views
- 7,310
Chapters(11 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- AMColemanRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I am not really sure what I expected, but this story of the universe's toughest waitress wasn't it. I loved it, and especially the variety of xenos that appeared. Excellent world and setting building with intriguing characters; it has it all. I think that this is a great piece of work..
- tikiiriaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0No issues with grammar that I noticed.
The world building was detailed and well done.
The characters were great. I loved the interactions and dialog.
The MC waitress pulling off a Cast Away worthy survival was very entertaining. Madeline is awesome. I love her internal dialog, her choices and her never stop attitude.
Very cute story. - furball tigerRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This is a fairly decent short HFY story, if one likes that sort of thing (I don't, but I was bored and finished it anyway).
It needs an HFY tag. It's not bad, as such.
The editing is ok; some inconsistent pronouns really were the most visible issues.
And it has possibly the worst blurb/synopsis/summary on this site. It gives away entirely too much of the plot, kills any interest in reading the story, and just goes on and on. IMHO a better synopsis would be far shorter and merely hint at the specific story to intrigue the prospective reader.