Rosalind
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Have you ever wished of traveling to another world? Traveling to a place filled with magic and magical creatures, being part of a wonderful and powerful family? Being loved and admired by people, especially cute, hot and dreamy guys?.
Well, guess what? You are not the only one.
One of the things she has ever wished for was to transmigrate to another world, leave her awful, stressful, God forsaken life behind. Meeting handsome and hot guys who would do anything and everything for her attention.
Well if wishes were horses, beggars would ride. And truly wishes were horses because it finally came true. After another stressful, boring day of work just as she slowly drifted off to sleep Emilia Jones finally transmigrated to her favorite novel‘Twisted Fate'. A novel that is on everyone's lips, it is all over social media, everyone is dying to know what would happen next as each pages unfold, discovering new path each character takes and not to forget how hot the characters are, especially the male leads.
Now Emilia Jones is finally part of the novel but here is a twist, she did not transmigrate to the heroine, or the villainess.
You would think that she transmigrated as a supporting character but nope, an extra. . . Maybe.
Her soul passed into the body of a thickskull, half-witted, her stupidity knew no bound. The only thing good about her was that she came from one of the powerful families in the empire, her power was known to be the weakest, a flicker of a flame. She was a beauty to a point and she had only a few scenes in the novel and experienced a very idiotic death. She was the beanbrain that Emilia transmigrated into. This was not part of her wish!!.
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- Starr Light
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- 4.6/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(3)
- Century boyRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Style:
The style left me with a distinct impression, and i find the choice to break the chapters up into smaller sections to upload rather interesting. The world does feel a bit generic, but that’s fine as narrative seems to be very much character driven.
Story:
The story is fine so far, nothing particularly special and nothing terrible. The plot is largely driven by the mystery relating to the MC’s transmigration and her mysterious interactions with the original protagonist of the world she was transmigrated into. One thing I do like is that the original soul of the body the protagonist took over is still active in the narrative. I think this is quite the unique choice that sets this fiction apart from other isekai type stories. I’m definitely most invested in how the MC and the original Rosalind will interact in the future.
Grammer:
not much to say here as the grammar is perfect.
Character:
The Character’s aren’t anything too crazy so far. This is too be expected however as the story has only barely started. I will say that so far none of the characters are poorly written in any way and I do look forward to seeing them develop. - sunshine1204Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0So one thing I absolutely love is when writers don't spend a full page going into detail on everything. You grasp that concept and are able to describe things with a few good choice words that paints the picture and allows the story to progress fluidly.
The Intro is so relatable, one of those days where everything seems to be out to get you, you feel the frustration.
One of the better books I have seen on the platform. - BulbusRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I like where you're going with the story, showing that Emilia is eager to enjoy her new life, and willing to bend the story rules to her advantage. I would really like to see some more description in your work. 1st person is great for getting in the head of your MC, but you need some outside narration of what's going on to really flush out the world you're in. A great example that I've read of 1st person fantasy is 'The Magic of Recluse' if you're interested in reading further.
Style: Great use of the "isekai' trope, I really liked her drawing up a plan/plot board for the story.
Grammar: no notes, good job
Story: I'm picking up some suspicions and doubts about Rosalind's motives, good job if that's your intention.
Character: I like Emilia, though a couple things, I didn't 'know' her name until chapter 3, you're probably going to want to work in some way to tell your reader her name, like having the boss mention it while tearing her a new one. Secondly, I thought her reaction to the maid was a little harsh, the death threat for example. It's fine to have her revel in newfound authority, but a death threat is a little extreme for a reader to get past in my opinion