Romantic Fantasy Adventure Of Saint Mom Lily

Self-Published

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Description

In the medieval fantasy world with swords and magic, Lily and her younger male companions arrived at an ancient pillar, presumably at the age of gods, after many arduous trials.

[Congratulations on passing the trials. As a reward, the leader shall be bestowed with two words unique class, one of the pillar’s choosing, and another of the followers’ choosing.]

[“Saint” is automatically bestowed by the pillar. The followers please choose the other word.]

“"""Mom!””””

[Acknowledged. Bestowed unique class “Saint Mom” to the leader “Lily”. Congratulations again for receiving this reward “Saint Mom Lily.”]

“Why would you guys make me get such a lame class?!”

Hence, began the romantic adventure of Saint Mom Lily and her four younger male companions who gifted her this sacred name that would remain in posterity.

This will not be the story where the warriors fight for glory. But of a warmth light of a certain girl that shines brightly and cuts through the darkness of the world and people's heart. But as it is known, you reap what you sow. How could she expect to only be the one who gives without getting anything in return? Although she may not wish for it, she would definitely eventually be at the receiving end as a consequence of her kindness.

On Hiatus for now. (Rewritten)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: lovecall

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 4,385

Chapters(14 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

ItsKHereRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Overall: 3.5/5
The story has a lot of potential. It has heart, and it plays with an interesting dynamic: A young priestess and a party comprised of four younger boys. The crux of the story revolves around exploring a unique class, the "Saint Mom", and using it to resolve the issues of the party members. Overall, I would suggest reading the first few chapters to see if you enjoy it.
Grammar: 3/5
The grammar is the biggest letdown in the story. It reads like a fan translated light novel, with stilted sentences and what look like direct to English translations that maintain word order over maintaining pure coherence. It is readable, but requires some re-reading in various spots. There are no typos, but the structural grammar needs a lot of work, and probably a native English proofreader.
Story: 4/5
I'm going to let my bias for this kind of story show here! The story is shaping up to be an interesting take on the "OP MC" genre, with "Saint Mom Lily" being the OP MC in question. I wouldn't say that the story strives to be unique or new, but it does manage to pique my curiosity. I want to know what the class is like, how the Systems in the world work, and the abilities that the main character has. Unfortunately, 6 chapters in, the author has not yet revealed any of these details.
The world is fairly standard: An Isekai, pre-modern civilization with an adventuring guild and adventurer parties. The land is littered with old, unexplored dungeons left over by a more powerful civilization, and clearly a fair amount of thought was put into some of the larger world building. It is unfortunate, however, that we have not yet encountered any of the more interesting intrigue happening on a national scale in the story.
Characters: 3.5/5
The characters are interesting on paper, but still undeveloped. As far as I can tell, there are five main characters that are crucial to the story: The titular character Lily and her four party members: Guts, Rey, Raphael and Elvis. Of these, Lily is