Rise of the Undead king

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Oooh queen of tombstones, let his name never be carved. Oooh king of passage may his presence always illude you. My prayers go out to you and your child, I offer you my soul and ask you as a mere woman let this one never die.

So it began, my journey to become a king of undead.

Will the gods be watching?

----------------------------------------------------Hey, this is my first attempt to writing a story and is initially practice.With this story I'm not yet entirely sure where to go, maybe someone else will be the zombie king.

Eventually I do wish to split this story into two.

I just hope who ever reads it, will enjoy some of it.

Have a good day all of you.

Ps. That's my cat Noesje on the picture.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021

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Rating
5.0/ 5.0
Followers
10
Views
11,049

Chapters(35 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • 10DemonsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love that he has an very outgoing fantasy. He doesn't focus on the way of writing most fantasy stories stick to. And he puts unique phenomenon casually in his story. Because he has so many unique ideas filled throughout the story.
    I have read upto chapter 5 now. So I don't know how it will fold out in the long shot. But I the writer personally, so I have faith in it.
    For the writer, maybe try to give some more depth into the main characters, that are important in the story now. And the first chapter is an very poetic writing. And from the second chapter that's fully aboned. It's an weird switch, so maybe you can have an explanation for that.
    Keep the fantasy going mate
    I need 200 words to submit this. And I'm empty. I'm just going to say random stuff now.
    Vell I picture for me as that vampire girl from the Skyrim dlc.
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  • ChickenwinnerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Nice short chapters, i can read them anywhere, anytime. keep it up!
    Do mind your english.
    the beginning feels a little wierd but you do notice rather quickly that there is something going on between the two characters from the start.
    If you like short chapters with some grim stuf i think this will be for you. I do hope the story will bring some more then him being hungry and that there is something more to it all then him just rising and becoming op, turning into the zombie king.