RISE OF KING ARTHUR

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In a fantasy world where there is magic, martial arts, various fairy and demon race, where magical beasts roam, Our MC Arthur is getting bullied for his meek personality. When he turned 20, he was assassinated even though he is a noble. But he travels back in time and gets a system called the Lust King System. So he starts his life again but this time he will do things differently.... Author's Other Works: At Last I Found You In My World ....

The cover image is made by Jackofheart. Thanks to him for providing such a exquisite cover image for this book.........

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Faysal_AHMED_5058

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 5,234

Chapters(14 total)

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erintesdenRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Okay! A bit of Isekai-cliche beginning but it still works. It leaves clear the fact the MC is a bit of a pervert who wants to get more popular with the ladies, probably getting an harem on the way, and be more respected by his family and peers.
Wonder why the guy was assasinated? Assuming he isn't an unreliable narrator (he probably is) and actually has some enemies, I could only suposse he wasnt the only victim that day but the whole family or at least all the siblings were killed, probably as some other family's vengeance or political plot.
Two things:
1-You should format thoughts differently than regular dialogue. Maybe using ' ' instead of " ", or simply format the thoughts in italics.
2-While that's your choice. I think it would be better to tell the story in past-tense. Present-tense it's kinda weird to read, and there are a lot of parts when you used past-tense anyway, so better just use it everywhere directly