Rise of Agze'sCanvas

Self-Published

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Description

The protagonist kalm having that which he cherished taken away by misfortune including his life was now given another chance at a new life in a new world with a entirely blank canvas for him to paint his own story. Follow his everystep in his journey in the magical world of Rayearth filled with fantasy and wonderous land as he aim toward the high heavens

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
TofunMiso

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREROMANCE SUBPLOT

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.2/ 5.0
Followers
54
Views
34,426

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • PimpingRockRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The main character is not overpowered from the beginning like most other novels and he has quite a good personality that you can relate with. Also the plot and hype building is quite good and not too harsh its a perfect for readers who desire a fun read.Since it's 2 early to tell where the story is going but so far it has been showing great potential. In conclusion, from what i can see from the above chapters, it deserves at less a 4.5 star the missing 0.5 is because i don't believe in perfection.
  • kilaske990Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Yes the story is pretty clichè and the first chapter really does have a grammar issue, but the important part for me in this FF is the story and it’s potential, also the right amount of tragedy for now. Lot’s of the FF’s in here are either too heart-breaking that it makes you want the MC to just be a psychopath and kill everyone for what happened to him/her or way overboard, messed up, hard try comedy. So it is nice that there is a finally a story that is just right that can be recommended for kids, since the MC won’t always get fcked by some bad luck or something.
    i totally agree with the 1st review. That’s it. And for the one above mine. yes you sir are just a prick, who maybe have a anger issue.
  • PuffyWingsRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    No idea what the hell was going on a lot of the time. Gave up on the first chapter. Now before I start, I do want to make it clear that i'm picky with stories so some of these things might be alright for others. Now to begin, to start off we have the bad spelling, I found many of them and I wasn't looking for any mistakes in particular. This extends to grammar and sentence structures.If these were the only this wrong I could have let it pass but  that is not the case.  The thing that bothered me the most is probably the many plot holes. How does he have enough money to pay of 50% of the loan? You stated earlier that they were poor, or at least on the verge. I'm sorry but a person would NOT have 422k from selling all their shit. In fact most middle class would struggle to even scrape that. Hell you don't even explain WHERE the debt came from. Am I supposed to believe that the car accident put them in a colossal amount of 844k? What the fuck. And also the dude is 15 how does he have a job that can even afford a piece of shit apartment.  Anyway I would like to say that this was good if I ignored the plot holes, grammar/spelling issues, but then that would ruin the point of me even having a fucking review. Oh and also  Artifacts are fucking things from cultural/historical interest. The only reason I don't give lower is because it MIGHT get better, and I have seen far worse things. But hey what do I know? I'm just a prick I guess.