Rise of a Bunny Succubus (a GameLit, Cultivation Isekai)

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Description

Freshly isekai’d to the Demon King’s Castle, she couldn’t remember much, not even her name. However, she did remember that she used to be a he. Also, she remembered getting hit by a truck. Guess it was a case of truck-kun striking again. Whatever the reason for it, she had been isekai’d to a fantasy world by truck-kun as a beautiful succubus. Why a succubus? She didn’t know, but judging by her ears and tail, she was kind of isekai’d as a bunny girl too. Guess that made her a bunny succubus. After deciding on the name Bliss, she started heading to the Demon King’s throne room. The system had been awfully pushy about her needing to go there.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: JustACatGod

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Rating: 3.1/ 5.0
Followers: 76
Views: 63,719

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Community Reviews(2)

HyenasRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
When reading a story like this, fun is the key thing. It wasn't the succubus story I imagined, but I am partial to the girls. Overall, this was a fun, warm LitRPG Isekai to bizarre land and living it up as a succubus in the demon king's service. I'd call it a cozy story in that there was no great problems that weren't quickly dealt with and the character not developing. It's comic, although heavy handed and repetitive with the gags at times. Alas, it stops in the middle.
MizarCaphRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I'm not sure why I read this story, maybe my monkey brain saw "succubus" in the title and was instantly drawn to it, but either way I am here and writing a review.
I'll start off with some of the positives first. The prose in this story is actually pretty decent at times. And some of the descriptions used are pretty solid. Plus, the grammar is decent for the most part.
That being said, there's a lot more to unpack here. So, from the very first chapter: we are thrust (pun intended) into the POV of the MC who, of course, checks out their humungous mommy milkers or "large mounds" as the MC describes them. Oh yeah, you do need to get used to descriptions of the MC's boobs, it happens, a lot.
To be honest, I found it quite funny at first, but there's only so may times I can go "haha, boobs" before it just doesn't hit the same way anymore. As a result, even after reading a couple of chapters, if you asked me right now to describe what the plot is, I can't really tell you. I do know the MC has large pair of tits though.
Speaking of the MC. She talks like an overexpressive UwU anime girl, almost constantly. Again, I didn't actually mind that much at first, but it does become a tad much after a couple of chapters.
Overall, I do think there is potential for this to become a fun light-hearted, albeit horny, story in the future. But right now, there's a lot of work that the author needs to do before it gets there. To conclude: I managed to type this review with both of my hands rather than just one. Make of that what you will.