Rimward Bound
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Every citizen of the sky-cities of His Majesty's Star-Empire knows that a ship, both sky- and star-, is more then just a few bits of metal. It is the grand sum of it's hull and the crew that sail it. 'Hulls of battle-steel and men to match!' That's what the Navy's recruitment poster's claim at least.
Every sailor knows that there is one more component that the city-bound folk ignore at their own peril: the soul of the ship. That it takes both man and hull to make a true ship, and that neither alone serve well or for long.
In 8225 Lord Jeffrye Saltonstall the Fourth, Political Lord of the Surveyor's Corps, demands semi-automated ships to 'reduce the loss of life among our brave crews', manages to convince the other politicians and bureaucrats to fund them, and gets the Office of Ship Construction to sign off on the ships as structurally sound. Dockyard workers shake their heads at the ships, muttering that they are cursed from birth, even as construction drags on.
In 8230 theExplorer, first of her class, is launched. She sets out in 8233 to great fanfare on a trip expected to last six months. Neither she nor her twelve-person crew is ever heard from again.
By 8235, the remaining seven Explorers are are commissioned. Lord Saltonstall managed to find crews for six of them but at the cost of mass resignations. TheNight Horse, last of the Explorer class, sat in reserve as her sister-ships served well enough despite ill luck and misfortune. The Office of Ship Construction quietly issues notice that no more semi-automated ships are to be built and that all active Semi-automated ships are to be quietly retired and broken up for scrap over the next ten years. The Night Horse, sitting in reserve, is missed due to bureaucratic oversight.
In 8250 Lord Ayland Wynstryngham the Eighth assumes the office of Political Lord of the Surveyor's Corps. His first act is to issue notice that no ship is to be without crew nor sit in dock or reserve for longer then required for maintenance and upkeep. TheNight Horse, all but forgotten, is quietly brought back into active service. Recruiting a crew for her proves another matter entirely. What poor or desperate fool would willingly sign on to crew, much less command, a cursed ship and spend months or years in deep space?
Well, you would, of course. Where else is a kid from the gutters going to find that kind of freedom in the service of His Majesty?
A [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge] 2021.
Warnings:
Second person is used in this work.
Semi-Polished draft: Posted chapters are subject to revision as needed as things progress.
Mild Profanity on occasion.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Necrontyr525
Royal Road Stats
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- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 75
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- 65,562
Chapters(60 total)
- 40: To GayleDec 4, 2021
- 39: Target Practice PreparationsDec 4, 2021
- 38: ClouwellDec 2, 2021
- 37: To ClouwellDec 2, 2021
- 36: Unknown Thunderer Class CruiserDec 1, 2021
- 35: VBG 82 KaerndalNov 30, 2021
- 34: TumulNov 30, 2021
- 33: To Sonwatch 2 / to TumulNov 29, 2021
- 32: Movement Orders 3Nov 28, 2021
- 31: Automaton, Improved, Mark two (Star)Nov 28, 2021
- 30: Refit 2 and Reinforcement 2Nov 28, 2021
- 29: To Cloudbury 2 / Cloudbury 2 / To Celesmore 2Nov 22, 2021
- 28: Zures 1-1 part 3Nov 21, 2021
- 27: Zures 1-1 Part 2Nov 20, 2021
- 26: Zures 1-1 Part 1Nov 18, 2021
- 25: Zures Part 2Nov 17, 2021
- 24: The SES Robert HarbirdNov 17, 2021
- 23: The SES Ann ChildNov 15, 2021
- 22: Zures Part 1 / Surveyor's Corps (Celesmore)Nov 15, 2021
- 21: To ZuresNov 15, 2021
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Community Reviews(2)
- PotassiumRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This one is a bit different than most fictions on this site, at the moment, no sign of an overreaching plot, just episodes of space exploration, it is a nice change of pace, feels like an old episode of Star Trek. What can cause some weirdness is the 2nd person writing, if this was edited or rewritten in the future, I would suggest the writer to change to either 1st or 3rd person, but, for now, it is readable the way it is.
- RainbowFoxRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0This is a well made story about space faring in the Sci Fi world. This is not a story about only the main character and his exploits in space but a story about him, his interaction with his crew, problems with his ship and of course his exploration of new space systems.
It is important to note, that you won't find here situations like in "Star Trek", where captain will go and start doing things which he shouldn't if he has qualified personnel to perform them.
The world creation is based on describing structure of Empire. Some parts of chapters have report form which I find original, maybe a little dry, but it is appropriate and in line with the exploration mission of MC.
The biggest problem I find is grammar. As in many cases of other authors. After writing a chapter, online authors tends to forget to use the most basic word checking tools. I don't find a problem with reading this story as a whole but I find it most annoying when I need to think twice what word should be there because instead of "they" there is "the". So please do, a “copy paste” action to some open source text editor with word checking function, perform a check and copy paste back to Royal Road text editor, or some similar actions. It is not a very long process, but makes text look neater and more reader-friendly. All this ranting about grammar but I myself am not English native speaker so my grammar is probably subpar and there can be many reasons why your system didn't perform auto word checking (including different default language or lack of installed dictionary pack in the web browser).