ReVolution

Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

kerezzerek

• Chapter 1: Unraveling
  Jul 28, 2022
• Prologue
  Jul 24, 2022

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• King90Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Its pretty good so far keep up the good work I like the them so far and res is interesting
• KydsdadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  'First effort or not, I think this is an excellent book so far and a unique spin on the "strong lead" type of book.  The idea of humans being a banished and forgotten "weakling" race is an excellent and refreshing change.  Fantastic work in my opinion.  More pls :D
• Maire77Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This boy right here is a legend in the making, watch this space cause he is about to blow your mind. Thats all I had to say, but I need 200 characters so I am just going to add this little bit at the end.
• DirchesdanRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  @.KerBear#2656 told me about this :^)
• gnarlytreemanRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  This story is only average, it looses the appeal to read it sometime before the 18th chapter, probably because of the overpowered characters, and sudden new gender reveals, and inconsistent story facts, but also maybe cause its late and im tired.  Anyway give it a spin, and maybe try to get the story fixed.
• halycon404Royal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  The problem with these types of stories is narratively and editorially they are a mess. Good LN novelists are actually good novelists, they purposely dumb down and simplify for a light read and younger audiences. They've read the greats for the genre they are writing in. I guarentee Hiroshi Sakurazaka read H.G. Wells, Isaac Asimov, Dan Simmons, and especially Joe Haldeman's The Forever War before he wrote All You Need is Kill. He knew the tropes and pitfalls of time travel before dancing lightly over them, inherrient plotholes and all.
  So I'm going to give you the advice I give everyone I know who's written a bad first novel. Don't stop writing, but slow down considerably and start reading. Anything well edited with lots of awards in the genres you want to play in, read. Don't read them to Oooh and Aaahhh. Read them and ask Why. Ask Why a lot. All good authors are voracious readers, of many genres. Look at a reading list from an author you love, it's just as likely to have a straight up melodramatic love story on it as it is an action adventure or cerebral thriller. Other books are how you learn; if you are reading crap, you'll write crap.
  If you want to write LNs after you've critically read 100 really good books that are textbook examples of how it's supposed to be done and started reflexively seeing the structural underpinnings, then go for it. Not the tropes btw. The actual story structure of how it all hangs together.
  Good mangas and comics don't count. Or anime, or TV, or Movies. Not unless you want to write for them. They've different rules and limitations. Good novelists are almost always bad screen writers. They are completely different skillset.