REVILED: Avatar of the Dead Gods

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Description

All eyes turn to the north with the war against the Wight King, but the city of Jericho is woefully unaware of the evil that grows within it

The product of a mad necromancer, Reviled was made to serve the notorious kingpin of Jericho, Bartholomew Decker, but why should it be a servant. Reviled now hides within the sewers seeking to increase its power by devouring the souls from the citizens, and thankfully there’s no shortage of fools wandering beneath the city.

Tired of hiding in the dark, dank sewers. Reviled now sets its sights onto the city above, but it first needs the Tome of Elithis, a powerful spell book written by an evil goddess. Unfortunately, the book is in the possession of Bartholomew Decker. It will need help. Reviled now navigates the city subjugating the allies it needs to take the tome, but that doesn't mean Bartholomew and his son, Baron, will make it easy.

Avatar's Ascension:

Now that the Tome of Elithis is in hand, Reviled Legion plans to ascend as the Avatar of Elithis. However, the Dead Goddess has other plans. Elithis gives Reviled a gift, the blueprints to a machine called the Grand Phylactery. With a new goal, Reviled heeds the advice of its matron and begins planning to construct this strange device while further deepening its influence within the city of Jericho. It can't let down its guard because Halligan, the apprentice to the hero Solomon, is scouring the city looking for it, and he has called upon the Church of the Virtues for help.

Chapters(80 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • ProseBardRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This was a very interesting read, especially the main character. Even among the inhuman main characters, this one felt a bit different, but not in a bad way. The way the main character is portrayed, and the way he talks felt really unique.
    Style= I was really captivated by the way the author depicted the turmoil and confusion experienced by the characters through the atmosphere. The narrative was also engaging.
    Grammar= I didn't notice any grammar issues, in the story; it was well written.
    Characters= The characters in the story felt incredibly real. Each one had their personalities and interactions, making it effortless to connect with their emotions and intentions. It was this depth and intrigue within their personalities and dynamics that kept me engaged. I just had a problem when the author tried to do accents,that sort of took me out.
    Story= Reviewing the story without revealing any spoilers is always challenging. I can confidently say that it does a good job of creating a sense of thrill and mystery over the protagonist particularly at the beginning. This leaves readers eagerly wanting to uncover the secrets of the world.
    Overall, it was a good read. The story has potential. I am genuinely excited to see how it develops in future