Returning to Legacy
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A God King returns after a long exile to find comfort with the family plus the empire he defended and unified. But not all is well with the Empire or his family.Author's Notes: Love reading on the site and thought that i should give a shot at writing too. Go easy on me.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- notsmart
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 12
- Views
- 10,531
Chapters(8 total)
- Chapter 6 The Avenging Ancestor 4Mar 17, 2016
- Chapter 5 The Avenging Ancestor 3Mar 15, 2016
- Chapter 4.5 Side Story – Heaven and Hell StirsMar 3, 2016
- Chapter 4 The Avenging Ancestor 2Mar 1, 2016
- Chapter 3 The Avenging AncestorFeb 29, 2016
- Chapter 2 The God King Nanny 2Feb 28, 2016
- Chapter 1 The God King NannyFeb 26, 2016
- Prologue V 1Feb 25, 2016
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Community Reviews(2)
- notsmartRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0FULL MARKS FOR ME COZ I NEED DA CONFIDENCEEE. but honestly i think i can improve more. Just haven't found out how yet XD
- lolman159Royal Road★★★★ 3.5*This is a very early review*
Overall: Kind of early to tell, but the story is generally shaping up to be a "evil lords are evil, therefore they have to be final bosses" and "gods are good, but can't do anything" kind of set-up
Style: As previously stated the amount actual style, creativity, in this story is very little. But what is there is nice to see. not much else to say at this point
Story: The plot, while nothing special, is tried and true, and always makes for interesting stories, even if the end goal is always the same.
Grammar: didn't have an problem reading this story, therefore the grammar of the story is good enough. Although I'm sure if you were nitpicky enough you could find something to complain about
Character: All together the characters have fit a kind of mold. The Hero is just, and protective while The Matriarch is long lived and intelligent. Evil characters(both of them) are completely evil, with no redeeming qualities. A naive king and a tom-boy warrior princess. It just feels very bland like a meal you've eat many times before was just put in front of you.