Returning To Him
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Talia Gray has never had a care in the world. Growing up with a Former U.S. Navy Pilot for a father and a Painter for a mother, she was happy.Until her aunt and family from her mother's side, reach out to her telling her that even though their relationship is rocky they still love her and that a dangerous event will occur and it will be devastatingly nothing like other catastrophes on earth.Talia doesn't believe a word of this but once her curiosity is peaked she can't help but dive into the adventure.
Note: This book has been published on Wattpad under the name GrayGirls17. Copyright has been enacted and I, the authorwill nottolerateanyacts of pirating by ANYONEunless permission has been requested. If such acts are done, I would like it to be reported to meimmediatelywhen found through Instagram (hyejinmoon44) or email ([email protected])alongwith a link. :- Hye-Jin Moon
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- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Hye-Jin Moon
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- 2.5/ 5.0
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- 1
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- 201
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- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5The MC Talia is introduced here in this unmarked stub, and I'm going to base this review just on the writing that is present. Particularly, the prose is rather clunky and it has quite a bit of errors that could be fixed with a copyedit. One section that was this line:
“Thanks.” I said as I downed the last bite of my granola and took the coffee from her. As soon as I sipped it I tasted a strong flavor of ginger and Redbull. chewing don the crunchy ice i noticed that there was gold glitter in it.
Just order of actions and several questions of just what kind of coffee has this? The dialogue has numerous errors in grammar and tense even in this small chapter. Even the tie in with French does not read natural. Not much happens in this scene other than introduce a bunch of characters in a way that is not very detailed either. My main issue with this is the prose and its errors, if fixed this would be an interesting book to read.