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Description

When he dies in his bed due to his advanced age, he still remembers an NPC from an MMORPG that he played in his youth, without understanding why he has never forgotten her.When he opens his eyes again, he finds the ruins of what was the beginning of that game. Has he returned to a place that never truly existed? Will he be able to survive? Will he find her?

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This first book (the battle mage) is available onamazon. The story will be fully uploaded here, but if you are more interested in the ebook (or physical) version, or you want to support me, you can buy it there.

The second (the druid archer)is available too.

The third (blood warrior)also in amazon.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: lls_sll

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 143
Views: 247,519

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Community Reviews(5)

S1qwemRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So not really for me, I dropped this book when out of nowhere the pov switched to another character, I simply wasn’t interested in repeating the same story that happened to the first main character before the plot could progress.
There’s also an issue where chapters end with a mid word cutoff. Not sure what’s going on there but the book would benefit from a quick sweep through.
Additionally a lot of the plot and backstory is told from different point of view asides, which I generally am not a fan of, it feels like a crutch storytelling technique to me.
That being said, the spelling and grammar are decent, the prose and word choice is well done enough, and as long as the story sticks to one point of view it’s actually quite readable. There’s definitely promise here, and I could see myself enjoying this book if it weren’t for my dislike of the story structure. You should try it, maybe you’ll like it.
Please add the Multiple Lead Characters tag.
Loki's ChildRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Now this story is pretty good but a little hard to follow. The First Book is from the point of view of one character, he is the one in the story summary. During the first book he talks about two other people he use to party with. The Second Book is from one of their point of view. From what the author has told me the Third Book will be the other one; while The Forth Book will be from the point of view of all of them. As long as you understand this it is far easier to follow.
My review is in the spoiler.
RauthrMysticRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
As the title states this story is not a litrpg. It is in fact gamelit. Those two teens are not interchangable even if they are similar. Litrpg requires stat blocks, tables, level ups etc... Whereas gamelit simply uses game concepts, terminology, and rule like underpinning. This is a gamelit story. I admit I didn't read much. Maybe ten chapters. But I'm looking for litrpg magic stories. This is a red herring. Not awful. Just mislabelled and therefore didn't fulfill my expectations.
Zagan's bordelloRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Tells a good story. Action scenes can be understood. The ends of the chapters are cut off. I have not read very far into this story but I plan on reading it for a while.
it feels like the MC had a lonely life because he fell in love with a npc.
LeblurbofananeRoyal Road
★ 0.5
The basic idea of the story is fiiiine not great. There are some grammar problems. No biggie it's fine. There are a lot of mediocre fights in the beginning and it's fiiine. When he levels up he regains the levels that he had before and it's fiiiine. Apparently the dude MC has returned to the the game of his youth after a hundred years interesting idea. But I really have a problem with how the chapters end. More than once I've seen that the last sentence end without even finishing the last word, or having punctuation in the end I mean come on at least check that all the words are there before you publish. It just seems so unprofessional.