Return of the Woodcutter [A Fantasy LITRPG]

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Status

Hiatus

Author

Yohan T. Normie

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• Michael DuffyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I've heard some talk about bad grammer, but I've not really noticed any. I'm a native english speaker, but I'm also dyslexic so maybe that's got something to do with it lmao.
  You can probably tell by the cover the meta the MC has, which, imo, doesn't get represented enough in RR, it's all mages or swordsmasters, gotta get a lil axe action in there.
  There are no glaring plot holes that I've seen, and I'm looking forward to see what happens after the trials are done, my only real critique is a minor one, but it felt to me like the author used the latter half of one chapter to vent a bit about internet trolls, but that's only happened once, on one part of one chapter, so it's by no means a deal breaker for me.
• ReedbetweenthelinesRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  - didn't like the twin assassins, not impossible but felt like a forced personality for them
  - mc getting over trauma, it really felt rushed and forced for the sake of plot progression; it's implied that he ran from his troubles and trauma for years but he accepts all that instantly when faced with certain death and a dying friend. again not impossible but it just felt lazy.
  I'll continue reading but it'll all be tinted in frustartion colored glasses.
• ContradictionRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  I only made it 6 chapters. 6 chapters with about 5 p.o.v. changes, most of which don't advance the plot. If there even is one.
  So far we have an isekai tutorial. M.c. takes the hardest difficulty that frankly, isn't hard at all. Bit of a joke honestly.
  The whole alcohol withdrawals make no sense. 2nd life can cure you of whatever disease you had, and death, but can't cure addiction.
  There's some typos here and there, most noticeably in the first chapter. Probably not enough to detract you from reading, but worth mentioning.