Respawn

Self-Published

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A powerful hero dies. As his soul exits his body, he chooses to postpone his reincarnation to see what is happening with the world after he is gone.

Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • MethuselahRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Summary: A worthwhile read for someone who is interested in a unique and entertaining take on a LitRPG.
    Style: Stylistically, this story's only real problem, for me personally, lies in the excess white space between paragraph instances. I'd reccomend slimming them down so it flows more cohesively down the page. Your text reads as though someone is sitting down across from me, at the table, telling me a story. It's homely in that way, and avoids any devolution into high complexity. This makes it not only an enjoyable experience, but a fun one, insofar as its ease allows me to create a complete mental image to accompany my reading.
    Grammar: I noticed a few missing periods and commas, missing final letters on words, and other trivial grammatical quirks. They were relatively few and far between, so it didn't damage the reading experience. The rest of your grammar is structured fine and standardly, so I have no comment on it.
    Story: Although my experience with LitRPGs isn't expansive, I've read perhaps 10 or 11, this is doubtlessly the most unique approach to the beginning of a story that I have yet read. While some LitRPGs make the jump from the real world to the supernatural (LitRPG) one, or simply dive immediately into it and thus avoid the bridge between real and game, this one works an angle of death and transference of consciousness into it unlike others that I've read or read/heard about. Furthermore, the central plot theme of death is continued, equally, I think, as unique with the introduction of the Respawn system. I sincerely look forward to seeing how the character makes use of it and its limitations, and stretches his legs, so to speak, in this diverse and labyrinthine world.
    Character: It's hard to comment too strongly, being only yet four chapters, on character development, however what I have read so far seems consistent, and believable. There's an immediate chapter 1 hook that attaches relatable emotionality to the MC, which I wont spoil via this review,
  • PotatoappleRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I wrote it as a comment, but I will say it again. This story was great. It hooked me at the beginning and kept me interested until the end. Also the idea of what happends after such an important person dies was really interesting. I'm not a pro when it comes to writing but I would say it was really well written. If anyone reads this and is wondering if you shot read this story give it a try. It is definitely worth it.